reverie of lucid affinity
51Image created by Cris A ...for me :)
To soar with grace
reverie, lucid, free
Eternal, droplets
Descend, entwined
Two within singularity, intrepid
Fidelity infinite in our
Wake, now placid cool azure, salvage
Roaring seas, lonely, aching, empty vessel
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As a cloud to air
reverie, lucid, free
Passion cupped within
Reflecting the souls I read
Free, I am from loneliness
Breathe in, love I seize
Droplets, of dreams I share
reverie, lucid, free
Palpable ripples of fervor.
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My lil' rant
This poem is dedicated to Cris A ,a passionate and inspirational, artistically gifted, hubber & friend! I am so over the moon with how Cris visualizes me, for he has never seen me but through poems and correspondence, not my person. To see the image above sets my inspiration on fire, to see such a beautiful image. The image speaks volumes to me on many levels of symbolism of how I see love, passion soul. I feel truly blessed.
I felt a huge feat to place words to the image and I am humbled in hope that those chosen can give the even slightest compatibility. Love you, Cris! Thank you so very much for such a lovely image!
And, yes , I am aware that my response is that of a babbling babbler, but hey, wouldn;t you be too, if some visualized something sooo amazingly beautiful for you! =)
You can find Cris' inspirational reflections below:
if you were a wallpaper: photoshop images for some of my favorite hubbers redux
There are many others whom inspire me here and really what you see is a reflection of the feelings ignited from my expereince. Truly my poems are reflections of you! Too many to name though, I am sure the main one's know who they are! :) Thank you, always
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Great poem, invictus. I too was bitten by the Cris A bug, as you know. I really do like your tribute as it perfectly compliments Cris's work. Beautiful.
Beautiful. What can we say? You've already expressed it so much better in a poem.
The image is beautiful...the poem is perfect...off to check out Cris A...Thank you!
what can i say, the two best hubbers unite. x
I must say that your writing is so beautiful--and a beautiful image to accompany. It is such a pleasure to read your work. I do want you to know this. You are a true artist with words--and it will continue to get better for you--I wish you the very best, continue on with your brilliant work!
adieu!
You've chosen your words very carefully this time invictus. My warmest greetings to you and to my friend Cris.
Very nice. You captured the lucid feeling of being in a dream and described it well!
Invictus, I only know you through your hubs, but I believe as you said Cris A has depict a great expression of your essence.
And thanks for providing a connection to Cris A because I am now a fan of his work. Your poetry to his image is simply a work of art as well. Great Job!
Randy ~ I feel he nailed how I'd like my poems to be percieved. And thank you, I love 'delicious' being attached to my poems. :)
dohn ~ Great expression to be bitten! I was, too! :) I feel bitten a lot from my expereince here. Cris, is good at inspiring, through his gifts. Thanks.
Paradise ~ Thanks you, I am glad it suits. :)
eyeofh~ Thanks so much! :) Please do check him out!
Poet ~ Well, their are many amazing hubbers here. You are too kind and gracious, and yes you greatly inspire me, too. I am very grateful for our friendship, always! :)
AIDY ~ Ah, your comments are so always appreciated. Thank you so much for your praise. With having some quite elusive things going on at the moment, this came at a perfect time to keep me in a beautiful place! :) Though, your words also sound as a good-bye. I certainly hope not! I will be around to your other self, too. Thank you for also being a great inspiration to me. Your work is profound to me and is so filled to pull many strings within me. Thank you!
shamel ~ Thank you so much. I try to continue to extend my vocabulary of expression, thanks for noticing! Warm wishes to you as well! :)
brandonfan~ I appreciate that you feel as though I captured it, cause' it kinda is my state of mind. LOL Thanks for coming by :)
Money Glitch ~ Thank you, glad to here your thoughts. :) That has me smiling, from ear to ear! :)
It's a pleasure reading the words that the image painted. Of coure, only you can write a poem about it and how!
Thanks for sharing this. It said a lot of things that the image failed to reveal. Or things that it only revealed to the writer.
Btw, I think I gained some fans through you! So make that double thanks! :D
Well, thank you for commenting, Cris! It seems to me that your image was a beautiful reflection from the responses of those who read me. Which is a wonderful feeling.
My awe, is that your image reflected to me how I feel when I write about love. I am not sure if it is normal, yet I often have that feeling of 'falling in love' when I write, and it is difficult to come down. It is a mad rush. LOL
(just like my response to you in email, I was still flying)
I am humbled and grateful that it is seen or reflected.. I can only ever know how it makes me feel..
So, thanks so much! :D
It is a lovely experience to work with your art, thanks.
Great poetic tribute to a great kid. Your talent always impresses me. Will you ever reveal you to me? After all you've seen me naked for sometime now, even my naked butt is on one of my hubs. hugs hubhunny
happy to see you happy with all these comments.... i should try to write a poem about the picture chris did for me.... the bird flying above a triangle er where will i start. is the rant done?
hope all went well today,
ralwus ~ Thank you for such high praise! Greatly appreciated. I so thought you knew who I am, hehe.. :) Maybe someday, I have reasons for laying low :). Though, I do thank you for being so reveiling to the rest of us! :D {hugs}
Poet ~ Thank you for always being such a wonderful friend! :) I think it would be wonderful to write a poem with the image! The image is sooo you! I hope to get this rant out, maybe it will calm me! :)
Anyway, I just sent you an email, poet! :) Thanks for everything.
got your e.mail thanks..... you can help me with the poem if i get stuck for words, is that o.k. glad all went well. So happy for you
I will definitly try to be of help with words if I can, Yes, of course! :) Thank you again, for everything! I feel so much better about things! :D
things have a strange way of sorting them selves out don't they, hope everything continues to move in the right direction for you....... did i see you on the screen yesterday
Yes, they do, don't they. :) I so hope the continue as well. What screen would you have seen me on, I am not understanding the question?
btw, do you know what is with thee question box on all the hubs?
don't know what the boxes are for. Do you know anyone called Daniel
Thanks.. No, I don't know anyone called Daniel. Yet, I think I know the poet you are thinking of. His poetry reminds me of things I could write about! But, it is not me.. :)
are you sure it is not you........ and even if it was you would not tell me would you?
I can assure you he is not me and I am not he! :) I can understand the similarity tho. He seems to have experienced some of what I have, is sounds anyway..
strange, i read all his work, and even his writing is a bit like yours..... he seems to have lived in America, lives by the sea, has a 7 year old boy.... are you much more handsome then
I have read his work too. There are similarities to his experiences, yet a vast difference too. I am just me, however I rate as pretty, not sure. I do love me, no matter what.
i read all his work any way........ o.k. now i know ...
great! now, read about the Dove! hehe :)
aaaa NOW I see the hands :-) It is very pretty! and the hub is great too.
Thanks Crazd!! I love it! Funny that the hands looked like boobies to you in the avatar! Haha
hi this is a beautiful picture, have you printed it out to keep forever,,,,, did the picture inspire the poem it is a lovely poem also
Thanks, seasoning... I have not printed it, yet :) but I shall.. You just reminded me tho, to put it on a zip... to save.. it will be kept forever. and yes, the image inspired to poem. finding words for Cris' images is challenging in that to feel as tho the write ones are placed to meet his visionary brilliance! :) Thank you.
![A Dreamer's Dream [Poem]](http://s3.hubimg.com/u/3823978_50.jpg "A Dreamer's Dream [Poem]")
Randy Behavior Level 2 Commenter 2 years ago
So he nailed you then, with his image? And your poem Invictus was deliciously liquid.