light up - by Invictus
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light up....my inspiring muse
To say I am blessed could never acknowledge the measure how you've touched me in all my days
Your voice has changed where wisdom plays, filled my senses overflowing magnificent ways
Sight
A match to the fire within, a torch to see through darkest day
a caress in times of sorrow, a kiss to brighten my day
a hug when solo feels alone, a fire to burn, ignite my dreams
a cloud to give me shelter, a river for my soul to free
an ocean with tides of life
far, wide
Ever-spacious, in-between
Whispering
Forget about tomorrow, love today
I am here for you always, never gonna fade
we are one in light and passion of display, feel me always
Never gonna fade away
Make a choice, as many as you'd like
When life just doesn't feel quite right
Visualize a cloud so bright with your hue
Paint your greatest wish, so we can make it true
When love arrives, plant it in your chest
Stay clear, bold, optimistic, and wise
Be true to your love, never faint eye
For those who weaken, attract their demise
Unafraid
Ready to blaze the fire you showered, greatest desires
How grateful, forever I remain
You shared your love and guided me by the mane
Should you leave tomorrow, I will bare no sorrow
For you filled me right, with universal sight
My love for you, is forever true
If you leave me today, I know It's time
To walk my own way
In open arms glowing, fever
Compassionate, patient
Surrender
Joy
For the love you've groomed
Will continue to
Flower
Into timeless journey, forever more
Passion filled through your sacred lore
We've become one, painted desire
You've set my life in blazing fire
There are no words to express
My chakra's filled, like a treasure chest
In my heart, you are the mould
of planted seeds within my soul.
© Copyright 2009. All Rights Reserved.
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Great Poem! Inspires many warm thoughts of my love!
the eroticism is palpable as can be gleaned from the title. I need a cold bottle of beer :D
Beautiful sentiment. I know these feelings. "My chakra's filled" Thanks, Invictus
Wow! Awesome poem, invictus! I can hear your voice so clearly. Thank you.
I was waching the Xfactor yesterday and Leona Lewis was one of the guest. I admir that girl. Brillant singer she is. Your work is beautiful my friend. Thank you for this lovely moment. God Bless you.
WoW ~ I am sooo blesssed with you all! :)
I feel bubbled over...
Robert Ballard ~ Thank you :)
Hmrjmr1 ~ I so thank you for sharing..connection! :)
Cris ~ Ahhh, so wonderful to see you and showing with such lovely praise... it means so much, always. Your comments are as beautifully woven and delicious as your poetry. Have a frosty one on me, too. (you will be in my thoughts as I 'Light Up') :D
Jess ~ I feel you do understand with reading your musings... You are much greater than I to dig into the patterns and thoughts, though. :) Mine are bare... yours are intrinsic....
dohn ~ Thank you x10... :)
kiera7 ~ So lovely, friend. I admire Leona as well. Her depth speaks so freely to me. Love & Light! :)
my comment got lost somewhere,.,,, did you see it anywhere
no, I did not see it. I will say I have had some weird things happening tonight with getting this hub up... plus all the above comments shot up at once..
please share, what do you think... I am finally cooling off, whew! :D
hi there is one very lucky lady out there, me thinks...... wish it was me. You are cooling off...... why?
It is extremely heart felt, lovely song and sentiment... I think i said i will go tomorrow,for you will feel no sorrow, something like that any way...
Creativity is in the air for sure, let's embrace it, or embrace something or someone speak tomorrow, You have been very busy, very well done...... x
Oh, my. Another beautiful poem. Another beautiful hub. Thank you so much for sharing this, I*V*I*C*T*U*S!
MMM, painted desire, me too. Nice darlin', very nice. You move me.
Holy Wow...Looks like you are taking it to the Next Level. Very Well Done...That was a Poetry Journey that began and end all within the framework you were able to put together here. Great Stuff, my friend...MPM !
Fantastic beginning to this poem - wonderful play on words, thought provoking - then you take a slight turn & continue with expressing emotions of love, pure real intense & passionate verbiage chosen to release the poem into flight.
I love it, wish I could find a guy with that kind of heart.
look up
Miss Take ~ Thank you so much...someone is the luckiest of them all! :) me...
Poet ~ Thanks... This one blew me off the scale of internal compustion, methinks... :) so appreciate your praise..
Paradise7 ~ I am very grateful for your lovely comments, always.. :)
ralwus ~ you too, eh? :) Thank you! I am truly blessed, for sure!
manley ~ OH wow, thanks so much!! Also, it was a lot of fun hanging with you and Cris lastnight in the forums. Your next level rocks... This blew me out of the sky, yet it is all to be credited to my muse...For without this lovely muse the words would not exist. :)
Denizee~ Your comments are always so beautiful and moving.. Thank you very much! Glad you liked it... :)
Poet ~ uh ha, you are right look up! :D
this is my first introduction to hub pages, does it get any better...
Welcome seasoning! It can be as great as you like it! There is so much inspiration here! Thanks for stopping by!
are you completely cooled off,. and are you sure.....
I cannot seem to cool off... ohhh, the despair! :) What am I to do??? **Sigh**
what is wrong with you.... certainly bringing out your creative side, so no worries on that score.... are you sad...lonely perhaps
yes...I am quite sad at the moment! lonely, ahhh...
aw, what can i do.... send an e.mail as i don't fully understand the situation, though i kind of get the jist of it. if you want to of course, don't want to pry of course
I appreciate you caring and concern, I just don't think I have words to share..I'd like to redirect my thoughts elsewhere...
Though, I do thank you! :)
i understand, no problem....... go on there is so much on here to get lost in, doesn't take problems away but masks them for a while....
Thank you!! :)
Ooo, di luv. x
hey are u talking to me lady
Thank you, Ivana! :)
Miss Take, are you harassing my guests?? :)
she is too pretty for this part of the world, don't you think
what do you mean by that? :)
don't tell me i have to start apologising again,
I'm still confused, say what?? :)
yeah i am harassing your guests, sorry
no worries... :)
Beautiful!
thank you, Alfredo!
good morning..... have you been on the forums all night
Good Morning, nope, I haven't. How are you today?
Beautiful in many ways invictus, charming and sentimental :) Are you still up? Tired?
Thank you, Shamel!! :) So lovely your comments, always! I am elated in many ways...The photo up top with the being in the univers with full blown bright chakra's, that is me! :D
*Sigh* :)
I must confess my appreciation.
Poet ~ Thanks so much for all your lovely praise, support, and good wishes.
James Agbogun ~ I love confessions such as yours... Thanks :)
beautiful....jeez...
beautiful....jeez...
You have a tremendous way with words! I don't know what some of the lines mean- I'm sure that'a half the point. What does it mean to me? This poem makes me hope that someday I can be this type of guiding, mentoring source in someone's understanding of life and love.
Thank you for this.
I am totally digging your new vibe! Many happiness to you. Such beautiful work and lovely video to accompany such words.
Wishing you much happiness on your birthday--just beautiful words--enjoy your day!
Myles ~ Thanks so much..means a lot! Your writing is brilliant and for your young age you have the makings for a very successful writer as I see! :)
aim4strz ~ Ahhhh. I am smiling huge with your lovely words, Thank you! :) I is lovely to experience such and I believe we each have the opportunity to each and everyday! :)
AIDY ~ Thanks so much, very grateful to hear from you! :) I am very happy and luckily lastnight I was able to land gracefully from the 'high flight' this poem set me on. Nice to still feel the beauty even though grounded! :D
so you could do a rant..... not giving anything away...... Imagine something that made you angry however long ago, not a relationship thing,,,,,, and just tell the person how you feel kinda really angrily. It would be so different from your usual stuff, as it would not be poetry, not be kind, and certainly not red, a bit of yellow if you must but only a bit. It would probably be quite funny
Yikes... I'm not sure that is in my blood...though I will think on it :)
it is not that is why it will be a challenge for you, that is the idea to push yourself..... struggle as much as you can.... you can do it
Ahhh, yes, now I get it..a CHALLENGE, oi! ha ha ha :)
i can read your words forever and a day . . I must admit my poetry taste is usually pretty primitive and basic and unless it rhymes I usually dont know what to make of it . . but somehow your words hit me in a place I wasnt sure existed. I think I am becoming an I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s addict.
this gave me chills when i read it i love it wish i could wright like that (someday0
wavegirl22 ~Thank you very much, you say, my words hit you in a place you were not sure existed, me too. :) I am very grateful they have touched me and that I can share...It touches me deep to here your thoughts, thank you, thank you, thank you.
roghut ~ yeah, you are here! :) Thank you very much, you can and will, my goodness just look at your beautuful first poem. I believe, it is already in you! :)
hi just got in from a gruelling day at work
Awww, hope your doing alright. Thanks for stopping by, I was wondering where you were. :)
i saw your comment thanks..... had to go to a fire drill thing after my shift to learn how to use fire extinguishers and stuff..... am tired now
oh, I see.. rest well. I have been trying to write a new poam or something, have a few started, tossed around and just not feeling right. For some reason things just are not sounding how I would like =/
you may need a little inspiration....... i have been spoiled having 3 days of and lots of time on here, but this morning at work i was put with a horrible carer, and everything went wrong, she ended up screaming at me. I hate conflict, i think i am getting a cold and have been in a deepish mood, and guess what it is my weekend on, have to go back in tomorrow. Ah well, what is your poem about
oh, my what a day... sigh... inspiration would be grand...
Whish poem?? ha ha I have 3 started, 1 is started about my old mountain life, then it travered into being about my brother :) 2nd about the ocean and love :) 3RD about why I write..
my head is feeling a bit wishy- washy...
if i was you i lwould do all three, they will all be great, your standard is always high and i would love to read them.
I might try to do some article writing but it will be next week before i get round to it... Do the mountain life one that sounds really interesting, why you write is interesting too and your brother would be interesting,. OCEANS and love are always interesting too so there you are. The last thing in the world i could do today would be write a poem
Thanks for all that... I hear you, can't really get a poem to feel me...or maybe I want to express more of what I am not feeling... :) but all I am feeling wants to come out, and that I do not want to share right now! LOL =D not getting a poem today, I do not believe ha ha
just wrote a little sketch about work and published it. Cris usually uses a rose for a symbol of me, and you have a rose in your hands on his picture..... what a huge responsibility for ya now there is a poem in that.... read the hub i just bumped up under my name..... this name it's called look this way, love that vid
"a caress in times of sorrow, a kiss to brighten my day
a hug when solo feels alone, a fire to burn, ignite my dreams"
Just getting better and better, my dear invictus.
The ending is very delicious, and you've sure lit me up.
Miss Take ~ I hear you... Ohh, Cris's images are brilliant and the one he made for me is breathtaking!! =D It is a HUGE responsibility to place a poem to such a magnificient image!
Ixxy ~ Holy wow, so great to see you AND I am so happy for you and k@ri!! =D Thank you for such praise... and for attaching the word delicious to my poem! LOL :)
just read this again oh yes write a poem about the image Cris did for you,,,,,,,, that would truly be magical absolutely magical
Thanks for coming back! I am still very moved by this poem with the video... I am feeling out Cris's image for the right voice :) I cannot believe how much love I have pulsating through me right now...magical indeed!
you are certainly on a high....... long may it last creativity wise, but maybe it's exhausting for you...... do you know the person that wrote the butterfly musings, sounds vaguely familiar, i liked it did you......
Oh yes, it can get exhausting! I had some agitation earlier and felt overly sensitive seeing so many hubs relating to goodbyes, death of love, and endings...it was like a blade slicing me... whew, thank god that is over...
I did enjoy the musings, though do not know whom they belong. I fanned Ms Butterfly earlier, thinking it may be you! :)
i thought it was me when i read it, actually strange eh...
ah well this hub is certainly not about death or anything sad..... so rejoice in that ........ go out tomorrow and get away from the computer for a while, blow the cobwebs away..... bossy aren't I.....
Hmmmm, maybe it is you! :)
ha ha ha, I do so need to get away from the computer! :) So go ahead a be bossy! LOL :D
i think it is you...... i did not write it........ yes switch the thing off, and go and treat yourself
As you wish! :D
ps. it is not me...
pss. wishes for a better day at work for you tomorrow!
Lovely and expressive words, thoughts. Enjoyable music too. Thanks, and thanks too for joining my club.
frogyfish ~ Thank you for sharing! :)
had a better day then a little shopping with Carla, just got in..... did you go out anywhere'
Sooo happy to here, sounds lovely! I had a great day! =) It's a secret! Sssssssssssshhhhhhhhhhh.... :D
oh do tell
Shh. ummm... trying to create a suprise for someone'''s special! =)
o.k. get on with it then, i wont disturb you..... i am cutting out butterfly's from wrapping paper, to make greeting cards, i am being creative again at last first time in over 12 months, it's a nice feeling....
flutterby kisses to the rose of all roses. xox
Poet ~ Love ya! ciao...good, good good! :)
CC ~ Flubbery, wubbery, kisses for you! XOX
Love it.
PoetwoPoem ~ Thank you! Glad you love it! :)
Love is truly the perfect gift, for giving, forgiving, it's
what all giving is for, we were put here to love and to perpetuate our kind, our kindness, to share expressions of love with our kindred. There really is no other nobler purpose in life than to love, it brings peace and harmony and can satisfy the sourest, dourest soul. Exquisite hub.~~~~~~MFB III
Thanks, MFB! I so agree, love is the truest and best gift! It is how I was raised, too! Thanks for the lovely words and praise! :)
hiya do you have 7 more identities, to take me up to 300 fans or followers as they are now this was just an excuse to say hi, come on another hub please on here....
Hi, I wanted to write one lastnight and was up till about 5am searching and delving in thoughts... maybe later tonight or tomorrow... I have to get some things done today... thanks for stopping by... I'll see if I can scrounge up some more identities, hehe
no worries, get some sleep.......... we will have a laugh on the forums when i reach 3oo but not always able to get on here at night we will see, don't work too hard, missing u
Hey, Poet! I see the 300 hit! Sorry I missed it, yet congratulations... :) been busy..
what are we doing on here, we should be doing other things, did i disturb you sorry, get on with your work, and tell me how to make some money, just a few hints would be nice
well, it was a crazy rush of fun...I have found a balance to take another flight :S you didn't disturb...I will try to help, yet I will say the best would be to read hubs about it.. maybe I can share a list of bookmarked hubs.. Ta
not wanting to put you under any pressure, but i am off to bed, looking for new hub. speak soon
it's up, Ta!
got there in the end, thanks it is beautiful, worth the wait
cool. happy to here you liked it...
you are so missed ....... when will you light up the screen once more.....
thanks, missed you too. I just needed some air.. not sure when I'll have anything out. feel like I lost my mojo.. but I've been connected with some clusters of people from Italy and Holland.. It has been entertaining to say the least.. been nice to have some chats unlike you can do here.
I look forward to feeling some sort of spark.
i would say the sparka are flying, the waves of the sea are turning, and wow love the avatar.....
Hmmm. somethng is in the air.. yes. I agree with the whole of your comment..
Thanks, I love the avatar too.. :)
hi thought i had broken the computer, it just went of and i lost a lovely long story..... i am a bit scared of publishing my stories, i can't seem to get the right technique.... i will keep trying. took this of myself with my NEW camera, and hairstyle, i look a bit scared ,,,, i will try to get a different one, it's a bit like Mona Lisa is she smiling, i wish ha ha
So, so beautiful and so passionate as well. I just love this part:
For the love you've groomed/Will continue to/Flower/Into timeless journey, forever more.
It speaks of a a love that fills you up for all time. How on earth did I miss this?
I followed Shalini over here because she has great taste. Read it three times and each time my mind/heart caught on different lines. Luscious and delicious and aching and true.
Your muse is lucky to have you! xxoo, MM
Thank you, Shalini! I appreciate your insight and lovely words. It is a rather timeless feeling. I'm not sure where you were these days.. but you are here now. I apoligise for the delay in commenting.. :)
Mighty Mom, Thanks for following. I greatly appreciate that you spent some time and where caught in diferent areas.. it sounds good to me.. I love luscious and delicious :) Thanks very much.
Awesomely beautiful!
You have a wonderful talent. Thanks for sharing, I am looking for some beauty today so I will be enjoying some of your words. ;)
wish all the poets would light up, wish we cold all connect..... wishing and hoping, and getting no where.
Robert Ballard 2 years ago
What beautiful thoughts you have expressed in thei poem.