Halo
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Halo
As we lay,
Embraced as spoons
Hearts beat collectively
Warm and cozied
Beneath the sheets
We've traveled many days
enveloped, delectable palette
Luscious, indelible, coil
On the the beach we stroll, play
Become one, miles disappear within our gaze
Stillness surrounds, caressing you dear
Strong and reverent embrace
Our lips touch high in the sky
The sand entwines a lower embrace
The brush entangles our arms
Leaving us feverishly placed
All fulfilled
Feeling your lovely grace
My heart races with the sound of your voice
Soul serene in what you say
We immersed within each other
Blessed be another day
The sun mirrors our light
And moon entraps our gaze
Melting are my lips upon yours
Sailing off to our special place.
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Yeah, I just posted it!! Happy your the first to read it..
Hey, read
'i breath in you'. I like it sooooo much more! :)
o.k. thanks
Lovely writing:) God Bless.
Thank you, kiera7! I actually changed it a bit...think 'i breath in you' overheated me! :)
Oh, that's a beautiful one! How you do it. There's some much sensuous love in your heart.
Paradis7~ Thanks so much fo your lovely words. I do feel a vast amount of sensuous love...It needs to be shared somehow...At this point it is through poems. :)
Wonderful imagery...like reading a daydream and being slowly drawn into it as a participant, no longer an observer...Thank you for this love dream...Larry
Oooo, ver ver boutiful. x
Sensual, lovely and warm. Thank you, Invictus!
Larry ~ Ah, so great to here. I thank you for you reflections. :)
Oh, why Thank You, Ivana B WithUnow! :) Nice to meet you, great name. :D
Ah, Thank You so much, Jess, my friend! :) Your lovely reflections are always appreciated!
keep the passion going, still away staying in a hotel that has just got the award for best hotel in the north of Ireland, going for a swim soon....
ok, sounds good! Ohhh, enjoy your swim...sounds fab where you are! :) Thanks for poppin in.
just got a new leather coat yipeee so you are around.... doh obviously
doh... :) yippee for you new coat!! Are you by the sea or country??
i live near the sea..... am in the country but travelled into Belfast to shops.... good old English prices and choice, so different from the south..... and using sterling instead of Euros..... Bought 2 poetry books too, but better poems on here to read in all honesty.... see you somewhere else in a minute i presume.
SweeT...sounds a great adventure.. :)
wow.... i am liking this one, may try something like this myself, not got too many fans and i really want to keep it that way ....... maybe monday night.... this is a poem i feel i will be coming back to again and again...
Hiya, Miss Take! Missed you about. So glad you like this one...means alot to me. :)
love it
I'm melting... :)
I like to call this: The Pefrect Hug :).. You made me crave for a hold like this. Deep poem Invictus.
Ahhh, Shamel, thanks so much. I'm craving, too! :)
really loved the title of this. It has such deep meaning, lovely words and sentiment
Thank you, seasoning! :) you gave me a smile!
don't know how you find these lovely vids, i always enjoy them..... going to go and see if i can find a nice song to inspire me,before i go to work.... i have flue, but have to go,,,,,,, well a cold actually,
Thank you, I feel lucky to find them. I hope you found a song.. Hope you feel better, too! :)
i listened to loads on you tube but none that really inspired me, ah well maybe another day
yeah, sometimes it is a challenge..especially if you are feeling under the weather.
i know poor me, but i actually enjoyed myself, looking at vids. starting being very creative again, thought i never would, had a creative afternoon with patients, and one of the family members has high up job in computers, something to do with designing colours for inks, so she is helping. One of my patients used to teach at university art, so i got her to paint a christmas card and we will scan it and use it as our homes card..... and sell them. Nobody has seen my creativity before, i haven't actually for so long forgot it was there, but you never know where it could lead, a better job one day maybe. Hope it does not push the writing out, as i am so obsessive, i will probably fade away on here, and stop writing we will see
Great news with the creativity! :) sounds awesome with making the card for the home aswell. How lovely for the patients! Well, I do hope you don't ever leave here forever! Each day as it comes, ya?
yeah if i can use my creativity at work, instead of just getting them up and feeding them, maybe i can balance the writing thing as well..... i got the response i craved any way.... yes one day at a time
I here you... one day at a time! :) You could share some of your creative talents in your hubs besides you writing, you know?
maybe i will do that, i need to buy a new camera.... i am feeling inspired to create a lot...... and write too maybe join the two up on here even..... thanks
sweet.. btw, what 2 up here? :)
sorry join the two creative things writing and crafts on here, maybe,oops again i am pretty sure that is what she meant
ah, a mind reader, he he...
good to hear...If you created art on paper or canvas paper, you could always scan it an upload to your hubs... Canvas paper is much more reasonable to paint on and frame normal frames, just remove the glass if you like, eh? :)
maybe we shall see what develops,
cool!
AMAZING, seriously magical :D
Uriel ~ Thank you so much! Your comments are always so appreciated. I have missed you about. Hope all is going well with you and school! :)
Sighhhhh, This is so beautiful, " Miles disappear, within our gaze" Love it!
*Sign* Thanks so much for bringing me here, brandonfan! So glad you love it! :)
I think your best line was sailing off to our special place.Wonderful work.Who wouldn't want to sail off into the sunset with this one.
Thanks! I like idea of sailing off, too. Yet, where I live a sunset by the sea is just as HOT! :)
no words,
LOL what do you mean no words!! hehehe =)
i am wondering if there is some kind of code here that i am missing. The poem is so beautiful, but i think there are few that understand it's meaning. I believe writers have codes, i am not yet a good enough writer to have codes, but deletion may be a good idea.
okay, and I did not just wink at you! haha
no words needed i love the poem and the song
yeah.. poets here.. :p
hahaha i am here now
too funny.. how's your New Years eve going? will you be up rining in the new year?
maybe..... you will be asleep i suppose
NOT!!! :D
your words melt me,
good.. melting feels good! ;D
poetlorraine 2 years ago
had a sneak preview,,,,, keep writing brilliant, hope you are o.k.