Vertical rush
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or hushhhhh........
Majestic times
As I glide
Over your body
As if hypnotized
Paradise I find
Atop a mountain
Mystery sighs
Awakened this dream
Every last nerve tantilized
As the whispering breeze
Penetrates me
As I decend
Over your body
Floating across your lips
A warm tingle arrives
Between my hips
Thighs of fire
Limbs relaxed and welcoming
Aftershocks of the rush
My face unravelling, flush
This journey, traversing
And cruising through the air
Almost feels too much
Yet
At the end
Laying back
In a bed of snow
Like a fine champagne
The afterglow
Dilated hush
Everytime I touch
My body purrs
As if it were the first.
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Thanks, Poet! The vid is where I used to live... :)
really, wow, i bet you can ski like that too ..... or are you the one flat on your back
LOL ~ actually I prefer snowboarding... I learned to ski at 18 months old.. =)
I love gliding...not much into bumps and cliffs...just nice rollers, if you will..
Nice imagery with a smooth, flowing dialogue, capturing your " vertical rush " through the powder...It always ends too soon, doesn't it..? Wish the ride could go on forever when you hit the groove...Thanks for this, and I hope you are having a white and happy holiday season...Larry
Yes, you are so right, Larry! There is always the wish for it to last forever... Luckily, there are places where it can last for over an hour! :) Powder = Paradise! Thank you for the holiday wishes..
A very Merry Chrismas and New Year blessings to you and yours! :D
Lucky you! Life is good. Sex and snow go together so well.
hi oh look who is above me, just came to say i like this very much, snow is so pure isn't it
yeah, they're quite synonymous in feeling, I suppose! :)
oh, hello seasoning... I tripped over you... again! thanks! :)
sorry i am always in the way
no you're not! I was just having a go! hahahaha :)
You describe "it" so scrumptiously. Between Cris A's Calla Lily and your Vertical Rush I must now head off to work a virtual mess.
wow, Thanks for the compliment! Though, I can assume you were probably a mess when you arrived from the "calla lily! " LOL =)
just joking i know you cannot get enough of me, wrote a new hub.......... had a visitor on it too, but now deleted
Okay... thanks!
Lovely hub.:) Have a wonderful Christmas my friend.:D
Thank you, kiera! :D and a Very Merry Christmas to you, my friend!
Powverful, one of my fav's....just awesome.
Thank you very much, Denizee! :)
Great to see you about...
Happpy Holidays and blessings to you! :)
Awesome. I never thought of snow and skiing as SO ROMANTIC before!!!! And SEXY!!!! You have an incredible gift of words. I wish you all the best, all the joy of the season and of the world.
Thanks, Paradise! :D Lovely and inspiring words.. it is amazing...Thanks for the blessings.
And a joyous and magical Holiday Season & New Year to you and yours, my friend! :)
oh, you meant skiing...nevermind. :)
oh, you meant skiing...nevermind. :)
very nice hub, it is magical and amazing
Have a great Christmas season :)
please delete my repeat post..sticky mouse...
but I do like this. :) even if it is about skiing.
Hot stuff on a cold day! Thanks, invictus. You combined the elements in a very clever manner ;) I'm not sure if you read this or not, but I too share in your elation:
http://hubpages.com/hub/skiing-in-lake-placid-new-
I hope you like it.
PURRrrrfect...meow! (I think I can hear your tremors...shhh..)
Justine ~ Thanks, I kinda like the funny cat paw.. :) sorry if you don't skiing. ;)
wolfpack ~ Thanks , sounds as though you've experienced? :)
Dohn~ Hello, yeah, I have read that hub, it is beautiful.. I'm sure you understand the connection... ;)
Raven ~ Purrrr. to you too. haha.. could be an avalanche! :D
:D Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to all! :D
hahaha...I hear it...oooooooo...........:D
For an activity I would describe as 'cold' this one is so hot. Thanks for sharing, I had a rush :D
Glad you enjoyed.. My pleasure.. :D
What a plunge you took me own, with only one ski pole and a prayer, and avalanche of words sweeping me away. Now I bask by a warm fire, with a mug of wassail in my hands, and dream of conquests yet to come~~~MFB III
OK, REMIND ME HOW IT IS TO BE ESCALATED THEN DESCEND INTO TRUE PASSION, I LIKE THAT, THANKS...R.K./LP
Ah yes, did indeed miss your treasures I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s! Mellow pillow talk combined with the ecstacy of gliding weightlessly through powder - could feel the absolute joy of both... still purring with rushes - what a way to greet the day!
This is absolutely magical...the imagery captivating. The entire poem glides with vertical movement. I actually felt the rush of the wind and the snow....beautiful! Thanks for this
hello how is life treating you, off to work soon
I was with someone who was just like snow once. Lay there cold and still just like snow. Thanks for the trip down memory lane, there, pal. :)
Things are sublime! :D Getting some final touches together...
How are you?
fine, lots of deaths at the home, time of year, but it is so sad, talking to them one day then they are dead the next. congratulations on 300 fans, well done
sorry to hear that..
Hope you and your family have a lovely Christmas though...Thanks for the Congrats! :)
MFB III~ Thank you, what a lovely description.. :D
Karen ~ I am happy you enjoyed :)
SEM Pro ~ Thanks so much..so great to see you again.. you have been missed! :D
alekhouse ~ Ah, I am so grateful to hear you liked!! Thanks for reading! :)
Sorry to hear that, Jess! Luckily, you have Barbara now, right?! You can create all the heat you'd like with your love.. My experiences with snow have been rather hot.. Thanks for reading
Awesome, love the poem, pictures, videos, even the ads! :) What a great idea for a hub for this season....Gotta rate it up! Happy Holidays!
Thank you, MG! glad you like. :) Happy Holidays to you!
delighted to hear you have been touched by an Angel, at last things are settling down, looking forward to connecting once more in the new year, have a great time with your son.
Thanks Poet!! :D Magic is on fire!! Ah, this is my short year, so get to do Santa, then he is off through New Years again.. It is fine though.. especially with gift today.. hmmm, maybe we will take a holiday next year.. ;)
brilliant you will be free to move around and be much more settled, hope you enjoyed today with him, i am sure you will have done. Are you still being stalked,
Some things are meant to be shared at all times of the day.I like this one at 530 a.m. I enjoyed it very much.
Thanks, glad you liked it.. and I think you are offically a hubaholic! hehe :)
Nice to see you DREAM ON.
It's a surprise that the snow did not melt with this hot, sexy poem! Beautiful!
All the best for the New Year!
I'm thinking...I have got to go skiing again...I never quite looked at it from this perspective! For me...this Poem brings to mind...much imagery of slaloming down the slopes of "white" laced mountains. As usual...your Poetry words are so real...that they are almost as visual...as the pics you use. Great Poem, I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s !
Thanks Jill! hehe, that would be a new competition... which would melt faster, me or the snow! :D Happy New Year!!
Manly, thanks so much! :D yes, it is a major rush! I luckily spent 10 years in what I consider the #1 playground in the world..It was a blast!!
oh what can I say, I like the heights..the cold..the rush..and the vertical... :p indescribable!
Thank you, blaise! :)
Amazing imagery! Thank you again, for your comment... Thanks God my wishes are met from unexpected places, otherwise I would write melancholic poetry, without interruption. (LOL)
Well, Thank you for your grand en'trance'! Melancholy does need interruption, for sure.. LOL :D
poetlorraine 2 years ago
yes i am the first i will come back later just watching vid