The dove with the golden heart - by Invictus
49Cris A Image for Poetlorraine~ Thank you for use :D
The dove with a golden heart, my friend
So much to say
Yet, where to start
About 5 months ago, a friendship began to spark
I remember it well, the day you blew up the screen
Too much poetry of love within one sitting (LOL)
I so understood
You found the fountain of love
Inspiring us to feel the gravity of pure love
So then, to see your shining light
To many, you are the glue that keeps us tight
You support, encourage, and sprinkle us with love
Your gifts are unmeasurable
You are known as the dove
I am so grateful for our friendship
All the encouragement and love you share
My hope is you see you're valued and loved with care
Your gifts are plenty
Your heart so true
Hubpages would be lacking
If ever without you
So shine your light
Paint your images
Let your heart have a place
A palette of your dreams, here in this space
Your gifts we cherish as we grow
A friendship with you we are blessed
Just let it flow!
Happy days friend. xx
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This was very nice of you to do for him. I'm afraid I don't know CrisA but I still liked this poem and the artwork.
dohn ~ Thank you! I am sure she will love that you were the #1 comment as well!
wesley ~ Haha, it is for our poetlorrainne! Cris made the image and as a thank you for him allowing me to use it, I promoted him! LOL
thank you so much, i have been trying to write a poem for this image, but all i could think of doing is flying off into the sky and disappearing..... being totally free.... guess i would have missed my friends on hub pages..... strange wesleycox turned up and he is a good friend too, even though he did not know it was me..... thanks so much, appreciate it very much.... I often feel alone, with my dreadful moods, today is a bad day, so it came at the right time..... bye for now xxxx
You are always so loved, poet!! I read you were having a bad day and felt this needed to be espressed now! :) I am here as a friend always and you know you can always mail me if needed! You are loved and greatly appreiciated! x
just know, you are never alone! I sometimes feel the same, yet friends like you remind me, we are never alone! :D
that is so kind of you... may just take you up on that, i think i get over tired, my place of work is the pitts, we work so hard, and get treated like children.... but there is no way out just at the moment.... weekend off at least.
Hey, sorry to hear that. your work in it's own is so endearing and must take much to keep a steady heart with loving those in their last days and whom may have been forgotten. Let alone to have people not appreciate your work.. My heart goes out to you. Enjoy your time away and please do know I am here, always! :)
thanks listened to the vid it is soooo cute
Thanks, happy you like it! :) had not thought of a video ..googled friends, there is another by Queen I had first loaded, Best friends, yet this one seemed to share more of how your friendship is so appreiciated! :)
feeling better after all this attention..... so nice to know you are loved and appreciated, speak soon, enjoy the rest of your hubbing, and just keep writing...... and no you will never be alone either, quite sure of that
What a beautiful example of hublove Invictus.
Alright I'm retarded, I guess I was so taken with the picture that I accidentally skipped over the big dark writing above the picture that says who it is for. Geez, what a dork, anyway my sentiment stands and I am really glad that I know who poetlorraine is for she is the main reason I did poetry.
a nice ode to friendship and the image does tell a lot about Brenda. and my hubs are promoted as well! what a cool friend you are, so i thank you in return :D
Poet ~ Glas to hear, Thank you. For aome reason I am sure I will never be alone! :)
Randy ~ Thank you for the lovely comment.
Wesley ~ In all fairness to you, I added Poetloraine's name to the image after your confusion... Thanks for checking back. Yes, she is a good friend, eh? :)
Cris ~ Well, Thank you for your kind words. Your Creative nature seems to naturally draw upon the essence of people, so could not be without, eh? :) Plus, we need to sort out a way to keep you present here with us!! Hehe
Wahh, this is very emotional, you are a star. Very touching hub.
kiera, you are so sweet, Thank you! :)
Ah, lovely, I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s! I was waiting for another one of yours. I visited Cris's beautiful pictures, too, so it's a special day already. Thank you.
Oh this is nice, and he is so deserving. Well done darlin'. He shall be more than tickled.
Lovely!!! You paint a lovely picture of a pure heart. One so trusting. Be blessed.
Poetry in motion is how you always paint. Beautiful, as always.
Paradise7 ~ Thank you for your lovely words. Glad you like this. yeah, Cris is quite amazing and talented. Thinkin' I like to make something special for him, too. :)
CC ~ You know, reading this, even though written for poet, to brighten her day, it actually speaks to more than her I am finding. Haha :) Which he would you be referring, hehe.. :D
I thnk I failed with my last poem to share my gratitude with Cris. Must brew something here.. You know, if I wrote about all the speical hubbers and my inspirations, I think my mystery would be disolved. ;)
Kim ~ Thank you for your kind comment. I feel so grateful for the beautiful connections I have here with special inspiring people/hubbers. Poetlorraine, has been so kind, supporting of me (through a personal matter) and many others.. :D As other hubbers, too!
Beth100 ~ Glad you like it! Thanks you very much! Great to see you, btw! :)
I was referring to Cris Darling. I missed something I reckon. I thought it was written for Cris, not Brenda. hmmm hugs, CC
Okay, I thought so! He does deserve something special... Though, I may need to secretly swipe something to express appropriatly! As I have found, this does speek for more than to poet (she was having a sad day, just tryin to give back). There has been something brewing for Cris..(I am trying to keep my cover here) shhh... :D
mums the word. love CC
Thanks ;)
cool stuf much enjoyed
Thank you, cally2! Hope yuu come around for the next as well! :D
Hello Invictus! This is a wonderful poem about PoetLorraine, you captured her well! :D
Thanks Raven! It was fun to spill about the special Poet! She is grand! :)
just came by to rate up, thinking about 10 c.c. today.//....
Well, thank you, for the rate ups! :) That song is a great one, no doubt! Have a great day!
yes i did.. thought I would catch you here.. I will respond shortly... see ya later, eh? :) Thank you!
i have put the link to the poem on it...... so you can tell me if it was you
ok, I will go read... yet, I have only written poems here. Maybe someone else we know, eh!?! :)
i don't know but i get confused at times, so paroniod i think
I completely understand, sometimes I get confused as well. It can bring out good work, look how it inspired feeling in you to write a very moving poem! :) It is good to set yourself free!
i am trying to think like that, as i am quite pleased with that poem,,,,,, thanks for everything
my pleasure, thank you! I am sure I will see you later, eh?!? have a good day!
mmmmmmmmmmmmm golden heart, you are so kind writing about other hubbers, does anyone ever write about you..... and if so could i have a link
hmmm, not sure if anyone has written for me??? Thanks, for stopping by this one! :D
Someone should rectify that...... Cris are you listening, where would i even begin....
Oh, hi brenda.. was just chattin' with a friend...hehehe..
you are very funny....
"My hope is you see you're valued and loved with care"
I hope so too. She is such a kind and loving soul. Even though she tells me all the time she is not.. :)
sorry if I am repeating everyone else, but...this was a lovely poem for a lovely woman.
Thanks Justine! :) some of us need to here it more and more before it sinks in. She is lovely, thanks you for sharing!
nice when you just let it flow don't ever stop
Okay, thank you!
I just deleted a lot, thanks for notifying me... should you notice any others on pieces, please don't hesitiate to let me know, ok? :)
aw you are so kind, my forever friend............
i have started adding !:) to the end of my sentences now. Did you realise you always do an exclamation mark and sometimes a smiley at the end, you have a twin on here, someone else does that too. ............ he he join the dots
I've noticed a ( !) ) but, you're missing the ( : ) I don't have a twin, that I am aware! LOL :)
please say you don't and put my mind at ease for one last time. we both posted to cris at exactly the same time............
I do not have any other identities that speak to you... really they aren't creative types.. that don't really speak at all!
Oh, I did not notice :)
i don't understand that answer to be honest
there is no reason to have a question to answer, is what I am saying!
just been reading this it is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo funny, honestly you two are the pits at times. did you notice my sister has 400 fans today let's celebrate
been reading all this over the past two days, isn't it strange looking back
it is.. :) so funny and cool at the same time.. "As the hub world turns" =)
yep...... the thing is that never before have i seen things recorded that i have written so long ago........ I can kind of see growth, and a confidence building. Some things are soooooooo funny, never would i lose it on here again. It must have been funny for you at the time, i was so intense ah bless, sad eh..... funny though
hey, we all live and learn on here and i hae to say, i had an intense experience when i arrived. the thing is i totally understood when you blew up.. i have been way fired up too. it is natural.. i think? and if not so be it, we feel and we are alive to be inspired and so off... :D
well that is extremely understanding of you...... i suppose it is all a learning experience....... It's unusual for me to relax enough to show my true feelings, i am usually so guarded..... ah well funny now, really really funny........ i have learned a lot, i think. Glad you understood it was your fault then..... ha ha ah
LOLzzzzzzzzzzzz, i don't think it was my fault... but, but, i do stir your pot! :D
yes you certainly do, you are soooooo difficult to make out. You seem to be around a lot, so hey you would go if you were bored, isn't that true, sparking creativity is good
yeah, you're right... things are far from boring for sure!! :D difficult to make out?
yes you so are
What? :D
difficult to make out......
haha.. I see. :) I've been working on a Tenby hub so a lot of researching.. how are you?
i am o.k. been to a religious convention for 2 days so spirtitually and physically tired, but what is new.... seems like ages since we chatted. So you are preparing a hub about Tenby? no work tomorrow hooray
Oh, sweet. sounds like a good break for you from HP. :) Yes, it does seem a while.. I am working on one for Tenby. I'd like to *maybe* start one for each of th surrounding castles too.. for the HubMob. I did not have the time for researching last week with mid-term.. so it would be a catch up.. :D hopefully soon...
how is your hub on Tenby coming along
Hi, it's been placed on the back burner.. been busy. It is there, yet hibernating! :)
Hi, it's been placed on the back burner.. been busy. It is there, yet hibernating! :)
What a great thing to do for a friend! Enjoyed the read!
Thanks, habee! :) Happy you enjoyed... she is a great friend.
this brings back so many memories..... The picture Cris did for me is beautiful, and i cant believe i was ever so gullable. ha aha
Haha, yes these were some great times. I will always cherish these times... in a sense, I feel we all took something special from the experience... how unique to get so raveled up in emotion and spin off each other to blast off some great poetry...
dohn121 Level 3 Commenter 2 years ago
What a wonderful tribute, Invictus. I'm certainly with you with your feelings. A great hubber, person, and without a shred of doubt; a great friend!