He is......
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he is a romantic...as immortal as we come
Cris A image (hijacked gift)
he dreams of peace
rain...so naturally and delicously liquid
Divine...he is
with natural effervescence
raining from his heart
soothing, deep, passionate, evocative
essence so pure
dance of calla lillies in the wind
intricately woven
delectably live
we lay electrically somber
he seeps
into our minds
souls glowing brightly
as a Gaelic wind
blows the measure
inspiration within
our eyes become melted
as butterflies nest
or painted petals absorbed in chest
dripping, sublime
heart, his river to flow
fluidity through
his ebbs and flows
endlessly into our quintessence
he shines
a natural romantic
immersing, traversing, porous, kind
releasing the floodgates of heart and mind
as the ghost of neruda
breathing at our door
Carpe diem, my friend
you implore.
shines as a moon in full
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Great work, invictus. Yes, Carpe diem!
Very Nice I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s. I enjoyed it more and more each time I read it. You have also embellished the text with some fine video choices. As a package, this is one of the things that makes HubPages so enjoyable for me - it makes me think, it relaxes, and it motivates - if you can believe that!
Lovely tribute Invictus. He does seep into one, doesn't he. :)
Myles 54 ~ Yes, words...so many to choose from and sometimes tonue tied is good, I think. Thanks for stopping.
dohn ~ Ahem...yes, you got that right! :)
Timothy ~ Glad you enjoyed! Believe this package is still quite too small! Haha. Thank you!
Randy ~ Funny how this was written in 3rd person, hmmm. ;)
Excellent! What more can I say, but EXCELLENT!
Lisa luv ~ Thanks you, glad you liked!
tears of joy, as two beautiful people unite,,,,,, your pictures vids, and everything just perfect..... wow, you two are divine.....
p.s. it was worth the wait, you got it just right, am listening to Dead Poets signature tune, must watch that film again,,,, wow hub pages is the best.....
Thanks so much, Brenda! I am so happy you like it! You are always so generous with your praise. Good to know it moved you. Thank you.
Dead Poets Society still moves me much! :)
oh yeah you have it perfect absolutely wonderful, knew it was coming and still just so much better than i could ever ever of imagined. He will love it
Thanks, I think I caught a MOOD trying to make it right... I finally needed to just let go...
I hope he likes it..Haha.
oh he will of course. It is so tastefully done...... He is indeed extremely special and we are so blessed to have him, his talents and personality together, make him what he is and you have captured him beautifully........ as he indeed captured you wonderfully in his picture..
But don't forget so are you wonderfully talented and kind to, i am forever grateful of the humility of you and Cris that possess such a talent, and help people like me trying to aspire to what you can do...... it is so encouraging, and i am grateful every day for my connection, peace and love man... and may your god go with you.....xxx
For the first time in a long time, I'm at a loss for words and to think words are like second skin to me. But I'll persevere - so thanks for this sweetest of gestures i am elation personified like new grass to the rain in the middle of summer. If appreciation can be manifested virtually, then mine comes with the bytes that this comment used to expend this space on which I now write. :D
told you he would like it, let us mark today on the calender, it is indeed a special day... listening to rain now xx
brenda/invictus
like it?! No, I don't! I lurve it! Sheesh, now I'm feeling all poetic and would probably write one now! I have something abrewing but it's darker. But we'll see! ;D
going to write one myself also wow this is creativity at it's very best........ love you both..... who is my favourite, er well for a long time i thought i*N*V*I*C*T*U*S was Cris, silly me.... happy to know the two of you, and i want your vocabulary ugh...... x
@brenda
and i thought you were invictus?! but i kid you, of course!
at least now it's settled we are three different people - so that means more poetry! Ha! :D
i wish i could write like him., though some say he is a she, just published my poem, picked up on your grass thingyo, it stood out to me in your comments.....
Oh no!! I missed the party! Haha!
Cris, I am so happy you 'Lurve it'! Means a lot!! You, and your talents so inspire me and so many others. Your visions are breathtaking. Thank you for your lovely poetic response. :D
I look forward to you new brew!! ;)
Brenda ~ Thank you as well for your opinions on music selections. You so crack me up to think that I could have been Cris. Now, that is of the highest compliments! :P
Love you Both!
you lie, you cheated me, but now i have you both, who is the lucky one now
What??? how did I cheat you?? LOL
I'd say we are all lucky... Though, I feel I am the luckiest! Ha!
joking of course., let's sort this out....... Cris did a hub about Pablo Ner. I found someone had written about me, and Pablo. I blew up on the screen because it was sooooo kind, i was a little confused at that time anyway, and i think i thought the whole of hub pages was Cris, did not think anyone else was reading me, then whoever it was wrote a poem for me every day....... Not Telling who it was, cos do i even know./......... Hubpages was surely my life line at that time, and i do have so much to be grateful for, and will never forget the kindness........
Certainly we are all blessed, maybe equally, but probably i am most blessed, since i have had tuition also, which i would have never afforded, and an understanding..... you can really grow with that kind of help i feel.
you told a lot in your explanation... :P Hehe...
yes, I agree, we are all blessed..and I grow with all of you as well. ou inspire me too! I have stated that often, I think... :) It is wonderful to see how we can feed of each other inspirationally, for sure.
Beautiful! Perfect poem, perfect pictures, perfect music. What more could anyone ask for? Thank you.
Aaahhhh, this is beautiful, Invictus! It just amazes me at how well you and Cris A's work compliments the others. That in itself is like poetry in motion. Keep up the good work!
How sweet of you Invictus :) Hooray!
Paradise7 ~ :) Thank you very much. What more to ask, ummm! LOL Funny
Money Glitch ~ Glad to here that, thank you! :D
Shamel ~ uh-oh, is nice sweet side showing, lol :) Thank you! He is more than deserving!
An "intricately woven" poem for Cris A...how superbly fitting for him...Well done, I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s
manley ~ Thanks so much, my friend! Coming from you, that means so much! :D
mmmmhh goood ..... n wonderfulll i like it
=D Thanks, glad you do!
sweet tribute it is
loved the pic ;p
Thanks, he is quite sexy, isn't he, blaise!?! :D
this was a lovely tribute to a talented gentleman, personally i do not like the avatar at the top and think there is nothing sexy about it...... however i do like the picture of Cris with the moon above him..... are you sexy?
one minute, let me finish cleaning up all the drool on this page ;)
Okay,
Haha... your being a tad fickle, don't you think, Miss Take???
hmmm, me sexy, maybe.... :D what do you think?
Cris is the bomb, the balls, the icing on the cake. He is just one big glob of freakin talent. Awesome poem, Invictus
yeah, he is sexy..is he a mortal? LOL ;p
Jess, you are such a wise cartoon! LOL Thank you! :D
I thought you would agree, blaise! :D dunno exactly about his person, yet the imprint of his essence is deff not! LOL ;D
One word, BEAUTIFUL. Sorry for the delay my friend:) Have a lovely weekend my dear I*N*V*I*C*T*U*S. Bless you.
I did agree Invictus LOL
one thing for sure bout this person, he's INTERESTING and SUPERB ;p
Thanks for the lovely comment, kiera..you too, have a lovely weekend! Mine has begun in a puddle... that I enjoy! LOL :)
Love & Light, my friend!
Yes, I agree...he is! :)
Cris A rocks. I am so glad he is around a bit more now, and what a lovely lovely tribute to this most talented man. Bet you wish you could write like him ha ha
seasoning, you are such a lovely and wise buterfly! :) yeah, I would love o write like him, yet there is no need because he is here and I get to enjoy this lovely works and the spins they create! hahaha...
btw~ sorry I missed this..
ok so I cheated and I am back for my third of the day . . and on this cold cold NY December day you brought more sunshine then a day in May. . and you did it with your words and my most favorite flower. . the calla lily. . and its dedicated to someone i am just getting to know. . which is even better. cause you just showed me a whole lot of the reason everyone round here loves Cris . .its no wonder ;)
yeah, it is no wonder, once you experience his work! :) I am so happy you came across this one. I feel good comfort now, should his work render me speechless, as it often does, that at least there is evidence of how I feel he affects us... simply reading the comments on his hubs, one quickly understands the general affects. LOL
Thank you, for sharing your time with me on your dreary day. I am very happy my work brought you some sunshine! =D
Sppoky good. Say do you have wings? :D
say what? wings? Raven's looking for some fun? :D
say, Invictus are you a devil? Where's your wings? :D
Well, I happen to have my wings on at the moment...Isn't that why you came over with your shades on! LOL :D
wings i have my wings on too lets all fly some place, over to the Philipines
lmao...sure just follow the star! =)
Nice magical avatar, Invictus!
Can I takes pictures? ;)
Thanks, and oh, I been missing you! LOL RRRRRrrrrrrr ( rolling of the R's) =D hahahahahahahahaahahahaahahaha!!!!
can't have these pictures!! haha...
awe...pretty please? This cougar purs back at you. lolo
RRRRRRRRRrrrrrrrrrr :D
is this a party and can i join in
Well, Raven.... big purrrrr to you! :D Though the pics belong to Cris... If you must need, email him and ask, as I did! Great to see you as always. hehehe
seasoning ~ have not seen much of a party lately..thanks for stopping by! :)
beautiful...heavenly and perfect.
Thank you, for the lovely words, much appreiated. You should check out his work. There are some links above the comment box.. I think from reading your work that you would really like Cris', too! :) You have that romantic blood flowing..
Your good!
Your hub is great!
Thanks, princess-sisi and aefrancisco! You should check Cris' work out! Then you will see what created the poem! :D
A Poetic Evocation of intelligent thought into emotion;;))
Thanks ever so much, Mentalist! ;) I'm grateful here how it looks to you..
and we threw it all away awwwwwwwwwwwwwww
huh?? :) who? through what away?
btw ~ hello :)
I'm going to miss him so much. I bet you never thought that this was one day going to be one of the most beautiful tributes to him.
Cris is everything and much much more..... This era of my life was special and tonight i am so sad.... Of course i am Brenda Scully Miss Take, Poet Lorraine, and i feel i am one of Cris' fave poets, You rest in peace young man, my heart is broken... xxxxxxx
Who would have thought, Frieda!?! woah, it is kinda eerie to make the connection of a tribute to Cris in a past tense.... I am very grateful to know that I often shared with Cris how much he meant to me.... he is deff one of a kind, and I look forward to crossing his path again, and again....
I so very agree, Brenda! We all shared such a beautiful time together and so very unique... it was through connecting the very essence of each of us.... he is always in my heart, as I am sure he is in MANY!!!
it is so unbelievable, that he could be here one minute and gone the next..... He kind of made you feel he belonged to you, if you know what i mean..... a kind word for everyone, what ever age, creed, intelligence level etc etc.... He sure was very inspirational and a great friend.....
looking back up there i forgot about Seasoning. Wow i dont think i could pull all that off now, how funny..... made our own entertainment for sure.....
Myles54 2 years ago
wow...no words..
nice..