Surreal Love - by Invictus
61
There is a space between
Time, we are of one
Mind, complete measure
One of voice so
Complete as a blowing
Whisper, sleepless
Ear, your reverent
Heart, loving
Grace of
Space, your arms
Embracing, flesh encasing
Bone, united
Warmth
Fused, you and me
Enveloped, whole within our
Soul ,completly tantalized swept
Retreat, pangs of heart once
Spoke, away into clear you found
Dear emulsion, of one
Encountered, sun where clouds had
Laced, heart so rung, so far
Past, left only our sacred place, always
Near, devout my gratitude
Bleeds, through my soul of your
Timeless deeds
Love and measure, soft and bold
All-inclusive my heart you hold in
Spirit and kind loving me
Bind, will not be a testimony of
Thee.
You shined a light in my quiet
Glow, with your heart a magnificent
Flow , adrenaline pulsing within my
Soul , furry delightd by your inspiring
Soul, united we will always
Be, connected reverence
Unconditionally.
CommentsLoading...
so here you are now! Good to see you writing again. We missed you here, and our lady kept the flame going for you. Great to read your work again. Definitely missed.
Poet ~ Thank you so very much for all you are, and showing so much caring always... I am so vey grateful! ps. Changed the song... This one is much better! :)
AIDY ~ Yeah, I am here... some big things needing sorted offline, yet I had to get something out!! :) I so appreciate you and the poet, is a beautiful friend!
Hello Invictus glad to have you back and better than ever. Great poem. God Bless
Thanks so much, Keira7!
This is not my style of poetry, yet I am hoping to grasp many, so all critics welcome ! :)
Good stuff and in style. Missed ya babe and thanks for visiting my, you know. This is sweet! hugs CC
I was having a bit of Invictus withdrawals... feel much better now. Love the use of emulsion.
Awesome poem
Beautiful. Missed you! Glad that you're back. BTW, did I tell you that this is beautiful? :)
it is always a great moment of emotion, reading your poems.
ralwus ~ :) I missed all of you as well. *sigh* Thanks for the lovly comment. hugs back.
Randy ~ My it has been ages since I have seen you! I must come by and see what you've been up to. Great to see you! :)
ek ellis ~ Thanks for the praise, I had to get something out and I am grateful it had a voice. :)
Beth100 ~ Hi, thanks soo much for the lovely words. I am in an experimental place, so it is great to here it has benn received well. :)
zampano ~ Great to see you. I am very grateful to hear how you feel about my work. Thank you! :)
thankyou for this beautiful hub, wrote one myself today......
the change of song meant so much
It's very unique and creative Invictus! It is like a one line poem divided into smaller lines... very complicated yet simple to understand. Thanks.
Miss Take ~ Great to see you again. Long time no see! :) I appreciate your kind comments, always. When are you going to publish your new stuff???
Poet ~ Hi, yes I sooo agree. The first song was just not 'it'! :) This one is much more suiting for me, too!
Shamel ~ Thank you for sharing your perspective, greatly appreciated. I am aiming to evolve to different forms. This approach is foreign to me, yet I am feeling is a surreal-foreign place. :)
wow! amazing : ) x
That poem is so beautiful. I read it three times and I'm going back to read it again. I love your way with words, your imagery that conveys a precise feeling, without a precise meaning for me...You are a gifted poet, one of the best I've ever read.
hi just published my poem, thought i published it yesterday, but i must have pressed one button too less.....
CC_18 ~ Thanks so much! :) x
Paradise7~ Thank you for such beautuful and inspiring words. Very grateful to hear! :)
Miss take ~ Hi, thank you. I really enjoyed both your poems! :)
Awesome poem. I loved it!
Thanks so much, Musique! :)
Nice passion, nicely tucked in rhymes here. Nice tactile imagery. Hmmm. Maybe I'll just go for a shower. Very enjoyable, thank you, Invictus :)
I wanted to ask, though - isn't all love surreal?
Thank you, Jess! Shower? Hmmm... what a great compliment!
I would agree that all love is surreal, though - I also believe each holds it's own uniquness which is a reflection from the frequency the parties are radiating. Personally, as I have dug deeper into consciousness, I have connected with source that has re-defined surreal. :)
sounds good so can you share what this re difined surreal is
My best way of describing it as this point is through poetry! :)
lookink forward to it, just seen you are busy, speak later maybe,don't work too hard
Sounds good...I like the idea of remaining synonomous with such a vibe! :)
looked syn. up i am learning so many new words,. Off to work then away to The North back Monday night, sincerely hope there is some good work from you when i get back, I worked really hard yesterday, inspired by your seemingly black mood, i mean what else can i do....... glad you liked the friends one, back monday eve.
You are soooo Lovely, Poet! :) All the best on your holiday! I think you will not be disappointed! :D lol
Thank you!
not going til morning so just a quick 5 minutes to say hello., can't wait to see your work when i get back
I have '2' up already! :D
Have fun! ;)
o.k. going to find the second one,
woo hoo!
btw ~ your adopted brother has a new one out as well! :)
got to go out now, i have nearly 200 fans yipee.... getting slowly back up to where i was, do you think my work is improving, be honest
Oh yipee! I bet you'll be back to 400+ in no time. :) Your work is beautiful and, full-bodied, as in a great broard spectrum! Good on you! See you later.
hope so.... put a message for ya somewhere at the bottom of one of my hubs, you asked a question, maybe it is the new one from today.... anyway must dash... thanks it has to keep improving though, not anywhere near where i want to be yet. don't miss me too much enjoy the peace.,
hi where are you hidin
right here... :)
how's things right now
Right Now...this great moment!!!=) Beautiful!!!
How are you? :)
are you drunk or something...... i am fine,
hi in work at 2 what is going on anything exciting.... just listening to this vid
Hi, hope you are having a great day! Had a lovely day with my son. Waliking through the Pembroke coastline around cliffs and the sea! The sea is raging with ripping waves and a beautiful white wash! :)
that was nice, just got in from work, having my food any time now, how is your son. There was a lovely white wash on the sea here, gently coming in was the tide.... made me wish i could paint...
Wow, sounds like a great sea vibe with you as well. We are just a bend away though the sea! Son is great, yet he had a moment, cause he was racing with the tides and the waves caught him...he got a wee bit wet! :) I think now he will choose to wear his Wellie's. :))
I hear you, the ocean is very inspiring for painting...
How are you feeling?
fine just been looking at loads of vids saying missing you, to do a poem of the same name....
great, csn't wait to read it! :)
didn't find one tho..... hello and goodbye....
Oh, thought you had... Hmmm, let me think?!? :) ciao..til the next stop! lol
i did not back in the morning.....found a few but did not quite fit the bill.... anyway the person i was missing kinda showed up so i will choose a different vid now
G'night! :) sounds good...
the complexity of a writers life phew....
This was a very nice poem Invictus.
Thanks very much, brandonfan! :)
Only stating the truth! : )
Thanks. The truth is the bestest! :D
yoooohoooooooo
LOL yodle oldel odel odlel la ee hooo! =D
just stopped by to read this, it is well written indeed
Thank you, Poet! :)
I think I missed this one, well its better late than never. Surreal indeed! Thanks for sharing.
And I was wondering if you've seen the original music video for Sade's song? If not, it says a great deal about what the song was about :D
hey you! yeah, you do miss some! lol ~ thanks for cominy by, and oh, Sade's "Love Deluxe" is on my favourites of cd's.. It can always be callled upon for a mood enhancer. ;p
I do like your video better! I chose this one do to the surreal imagery...haha
bte ~ nice new avatar..what's the meaning??
Cris,
Edit~ That video you shared.. ouch, "deception". noticed the word at the beginning.. I just lost in the water..haha
Yeah, not a happy ending there. Thanks for sharing..
being as i am here reading may as well comment..... mermaids aw. going to work 2 to 8 bye for now
Touching sentiments indeed! Very nicely done!
Thanks, have a good day, Poet!
Pappa Plues ~ Thank you very much. I appreciate your reading :)
My avatar is called a 'parol' (puh-roll) or the Philippine Christmas lantern. It symbolizes the star of Bethlehem :D
Awww, that is lovely :) and it so suits you, too.
Love & Light (pun intended)
and I changed it again, I put it outside a window to give you an idea on how it is displayed here :D
Ah, thanks, that is sweet. :) I checked it out on your profile.. not here yet..
does everyone dispay outside there homes at christmas?
it reminds of a dreamcatcher, so a star of Bethlehem inside would seem quite profound.
are there any lores of the 'parol'?
most everyone does as the Philippines is mostly Catholic, and churches have really big big ones on their facade with lighted trimmings cascading down upon their main doors. the parol as the star and the trimmings, we call them 'banderitas' (from Spanish bandera or flag and itas, a suffix for mini or smaller versions), as its rays.
Yeah now that you've mentioned it, it kind of looks like a dream catcher.
A lore? Hmmm there's none that I know of :D
wow, thank you for sharing.. :) ~ I love learning about various cultures and traditions. The Philippines looks so beautifully festive for the holidays, from photos I've seen. Is is true that you decorate at the end of September?
Hahaha you've heard wrong! We start decorating at the start of September! But most start decorating right after Halloween. As for my family, we do it first week of December :D
Hahahaha oh my! start of September, woah...
yeah, the fist week of December is a good time...we typically decorate the day after Thanksgiving (American holiday). Otherwise known as "Black Friday" aka biggest shopping day in America for Christmas. Which is the last Friday of November. I think is good to wait a bit, otherwise by the time Christmas is here some excitement can fizzle... This was a great chat, thank you! :)
Gotta go get my wee one now...see ya later.
Outstanding poem, Invictus!
Thank you, Raven! glad you liked. :)
can i still steal your songs, i like this one, i think i could write a hub around it maybe one day
feel free.. they don't belong to me.. have at it!! :) I can drop you the link if you like... or you could click on Cris' link above and find this vid..
oh yeah i watched that vid the other day it is cool, maybe i will, freezing here today.
yeah, It is cold here, too.. though I may suck it up and head out to the beach.. It is a beautiful sunny day, none the less.
oh the beach yeah a walk on the beach would be nice i suppose, how far are you fromthe beach? I am less than 5 minutes, have you been writing much like your poem...???? questions questions questions
the ramblings I referred to in my poem were not just from today.. they are from a course of time :) We are maybe a mile from the beach.. if the road wasn't so narrow, I'd walk..
fused. . laced.. unconditionally .. a soul . .g-d u r amazing . .and so I have another new favorite to add to my list .. i cant wait until the day you are bound in a hardcover. .i will be the first buyer of that one . .
i love the last few lines of this poem and the thought process that brought you to it. Will be reading more
wow, wavegirl! Thanks for that.. coming back to this poem shows me how I've been in the surreal loop for a bit, trying to express.. I had not ever thought seriously about a book. I am delighted that you feel it would be worth having... maybe I have a new goal, we'll see... :) I've always been facinated by unconditional love and feel that it should exist more and boader than that of parent/ child which seems the easiest to acknowledge in our society. :)
Thanks, seasoning! Thinking of what was transpiring when this poem was written it really ironic how it came out... Glad you liked! :)
Surreal love? Very interesting composition, loved it very much...
Yeah, a bit synonymous, to a degree.. if that is you question. Thank you, happy you loved it.
Simply breathtaking. I hear it in my head.
Thank you, Ixxy! :) So lovely to see you around again and sharing your beautiful thoughts. So appreciated. :)
poetlorraine 2 years ago
you are back you are definately back, now stay do you hear, stop disapearing...... going to listen to vid now