Soul Seasoning - by Invictus
54A new dawn awaits...
A Season of the SOUL
I see you on the wheel
That time never seems to heal
Though love surrounds you everyday
.
At times you feel rotten
That love has forgotten
That you were a diamond in your days.
Love has it’s cost
For those whom have lost
In selfish and awful ways
The pain is for real
Yet it shall heal
For each day lifts a bit of haze
It has not been long
For the suffering song
To be realized from your
gaze.
It takes time to mend
And to comprehend
The choices that you once made
You may call me a liar
Yet my life is on fire
Light has affirmed my ways.
Though I lived in your throws one day.
It takes time to acquire
To reclaim an know what is desired
Through the whims of some lonesome days
Remove wounds that burn like fire
To once again feel right in your days
.
It is so true
If you focus on You
And the life you brought and aspire
Affirming the strength of the higher
Of brighter days
In time your feeling of rot
Will so be sought
Through your will of glum some days
The feelings are for real
Yet it takes quite some time to heal
The choices that were once made
Though, low and behold your
Life shall shimmer
As the diamond, not the winner
For life would be a loss
If never tempted the cost
The extra mile, what would be the loss?
Of something you thought
Could be true
Yet the higher cost
To lose a family for a child.
I honour you
For the pain you’re going through
My choice originally yours
Yet my life was to the core
Of breath
Being strangled at bay
My sons life has a price
Not to sacrifice
Though his father would love for me to disappear.
Today is won, and this dread is no longer near
.Maximus is his name, to rattle of the vein
Of the father that wanted him dead
A journey of all cost, to keep my true love from being lost
Gave my son a life, now free of dread
He is brilliant in every way, of countless endless days
Never be a wince of haze.
My days always shimmer
Fore he is always the winner
Should I fall in a shallow place
You too will have your season
Every day for a reason
For you can not freigh from higher
With a child’s blaze of fire
That which developed from your core
It's alright to be
With so much uncertainty
With all that has been ripped from your core
Yet a day will desire from you to claim the fire
Of a new dream from within
Someday you too shall bare
The light
Glimmer
Smile
That has lived
All the while
And also you will know
The friends you behold
As your soul is always a bright fire.
The past is lifting
At the past you will see
Only memories of beauty
Of why you placed thee
Time is the wheel
Please don't get caught as the heel
Of life in dumb slum days
I believe you're for real
In the aching wheel of a time, I saw
Too many days
Your talent abounds
Can you not see and feel the omniscient bounds
Of the beauty in your life so real?
Astonishing, I see a man who was meant to be
Who placed his heart on the wheel
Yet time has told, that was old
Yet.... your soul is behind the wheel
Only you hold
The beauty that could be told
At the end of this heart breaking shpeel
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Very beautiful! Seems a great love, hopefully to hold again.
Hello, i like this poem, very interesting and I would see many could relate to it
do you have a son.....
you do
lovely and optimistic. very nice.
oh, this was really sad for me, I mean, reading the opening lines...then, as I went on with each stanza...wow. wow. I do not know what more I can say.
this is my fourth time reading this, btw. wow. this definitely struck home for me. There were elements in this that applied to my life...just, wow.
Rhymes, you made it sound great.
LOOOVVEE IT :))))))))) its so ...er..... lively :))) not as slow as mine heh i love it I think you got 'it' x
what has steak seasoning got to do with this poem i wonder.....
hehehee Brenda Scully?!!!! hmmm you funny thing :) wink
Nice work. I love the pattern, and the message
I am curious ,how long did it take you to write such a poem.My thoughts and feelings are mixed.Nice piece of work.
I have to PONDER this very deep POEM..As a poet I can go to the DOMAINS OF THE SOUL. For I so relate that pOETRY IS A LANGUAGE OF THE SOUL.
Thanks for sharing. HOpe we can become fans and share hubs.
I look forward to more of your HUBS/POEMS and comments. YOU A ARE SO VERY DEEP and I soooo honor it as I honor my own soul depth.
cheers
michael
beautiful poem
Absolutely beautiful. I have to become your fan for this one alone . !!!
nt was a great help to me, whoever it was for, believing it was for someone close was inspiring. Do you think the wife ever read them?
nt was a great help to me, whoever it was for, believing it was for someone close was inspiring. Do you think the wife ever read them?
Very soulful to me, loved the composition - very well done...
Such a deep piece, nice :) Voted up
'For life would be a loss
If never tempted the cost
The extra mile, what would be the loss?'
came back this poem again :) been a long time
love this in particular :)
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Gypsy Willow Level 5 Commenter 2 years ago
Interesting rhyming poem Thanks