Secrets they keep.... by Invictus
58Image by, Cris A.
Hidden fantasies of love and rapture.. a reverent shackling of two souls
While silently immersed in one another dripping in melodic ecstasy, a fanciful affair of hearts and minds. Still... neither dares to spill...opening the depth of desire for the other. It is way beyond infatuation. By day, face to face, they are friends, whom hold much regard for the other. Only leaving droplets of affection, a trail to tease the senses of the other, but not quite unravel their hidden aura of love.
He watches her, never further than a breath away. She can feel his heat penetrating the air that surrounds. She knows, when he is dreaming of her and plays fanciful thoughts through his being. She, as well, slips into her dream, and takes him along in her fantasies of them as one.
Maybe... it is a, he is watching her, watching him scenario... tantalizing all their senses at once. And maybe, he doesn't know she knows... but, but... she is soooo aware of him and their magical connection. He has become a part of her very skin. It sometimes breaks her to keep her silence, yet, she also feels it would be wrong of her to release the secret first.. like taking something away from him.. those thoughts keep her enslaved in the.. secrets they keep.
So compelled by his presence, she cannot resist. She must touch and caress as his will portrays, as he as well cannot resist. Little does he know, her feverish desires for him illuminate as an equal player. It is her will coinciding...always. Together, their heavenly bodies roll in the heat of passion... suspended in time...reflecting a radiance of heat of a smoldering summers day. A magnetic sea of eternal bliss.
Will they ever release their secrets?
Will he ever get up the courage to knock upon her door?
Is what they feel just fantasy?
Or...does a pendulum speak the truth and see a radiant future for them together to.. implore?
To be continued...............................
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yikes....I need to take a shower I think.
Oh I love a secret. This reminds me of when I met my husband.
~ msorensson ~ Thank you so much! :) I so agree. Nothing like the present. :)
~ Justine ~ Ahh, so are so sweet! :) Secrets can be fun, but just how many do we need? ;) Thanks, what a lovely thought that this brought fond memories!
I love Barbara Streisand
Hi my dear friend, your writing is sublim, each sentence even each word I should say, feels like a caress. Its Really a beautiful hub. I liked that photos from Chris A. Thank you for this lovely journey. Have a great weekend my dear I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s.:)
Hey, Poet! :) Long time no chat! Thanks.. Me too! :)
Aww, Keira... a way long time since I've seen you about.. Thanks so much for the lovely words :) very grateful... you too have a lovely weekend :) great to see you.
Oh, terrfic! So sexy and romantic. Thank you, again!
"Upon the love threshold she stands
his eyes a sweetness, makes her care
a whirlpool of passionate quick sands
a blending touch can scarcely bear
and in the end a mutual flood
of inner rivers pumping blood
a promised world, caress delights
and ever burning lips and lights"
Beautiful, sensible, quite poetic and super romantic! Loved it!
Warmest regards and blessings,
Al
~~ Thank you so much.. as always, Paradise! :)
~~ Sheesh, Al! that is a hot poem to share! :) Thanks so much.. so happy you enjoyed this.
Warm blessing to you,
Namaste
i think you and cris are a perfect combination, for the very best in art....... taking me to places, that are not good for my health..... lovely, wonderful, take a bow the two of you.
Awww, you shower me with beautiful words.. I love your comment, haha =) ahem.. just remember to breathe.. ;) Thanks so much. I've wanted to write something about this image since the whole inspiration thingy hub.. Yet, I just did not have a story then.. haha, so this image has been sitting in my files..forever. :)
it's nice to come back, when we have time for something that means a lot to us. I have to say it was very well written, it stirs the emotions big time..... flattery will get me nowhere, but i am happy flying off to England for four days i cannot wait..... supposed to be packing,then you came along, can i blame you if i have to buy all new clothes, for nothing is washed..... speak soon, keep delving into the archives. and connecting, breathing, and stirring the pot.
Ahh, thanks so much.. woo hoo, england for a holiday... NICE! Hey, wouldn't it be great to have a reason for a shopping spree? haha.. Actually, you should hold up and do some shopping in America. You get a better exchange there ;)
I shall try to keep digging.. I like to stir pots! LOL :D
Have a lovely trip!
ah well England is great for crafts, and i am so in the mood for crafts, the time of year has wonderful things in the shops and never more so than the good old north of england.
Yep we know you do, some people fall for it every time too doh..... i will be with my son, who is brilliant company, a laugh a minute, and his wife and 3 gorgous kids, plus my neice, Maddison, and dad and sister...... what am i actually doing in Ireland at all?
Tune in next week and ....
Thanks I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s. If I were only alive! Keep them rolling!
OMG... I so forgot to write
To be continued.................................... :))
Thanks Micky, swimming in my puddles keep my blood pumping! :)
in the airport catching up with all the gossip, yeah you must continue this..... not used to travelling alone, but i am being brave....
Yes, most definitely he should knock on that door! Thanks as always for sharing your poetry that reaches out and grips our hearts and minds!
WHat??? In the airport! LOLz ~ So funny... I was just thinking how quiet it is going to be here.. :p
Good on you for taking the plunge.. I have enjoyed many journeys alone.. good quiet time.. :) Have a safe journey.
Aww, thanks so much, Shalini! :D I must have posted the last comment at the same time as you! I so appreciate your lovely words and thoughts! :)
I really like Cris's image he provided and liked the way you translated it. The ambiguity of such is very intriguing. Thanks so much for another wonderful and thoughtful piece!
Thanks so much, Dohn! :) This image is from a Lonnng ago hub by Cris to inspire after, I believe the original slumps of the hub challenges.. It so intruiged me... yet, I did not have any words for it back then... Funny what comes from cleaning out images saved on files.. I appreciate that you enjoyed it. :)
This is so so sexy and addicting! This is just the beginning and I'm in love with "he" already..
It is too late now..the pendulum has hypnotized me this much..cant wait for the next ;)
THIS PEICE IS WONDERFUL, THANK YOU...
I'm like a cat, curiosity can kill me. And I hate to wait :(. When we can see the next chapter of them? Please, don't take too long???
Really interesting to see what they will do about each other. Hmmm...
~ blaise ~ uh-oh...I had not originally planned on "writing" a sequel ;)... just thought it could tease and tantilize a bit... of "what if?" Maybe a "nudge", perse ;p
So happy you enjoyed it.. we shall see where it goes, haha. (I guess they may need names if it turns into a saga) we'll see. Thanks as always for reading. :)
~ Karen ~ Thank you! glad you enjoyed! :)
~ Freya ~ HA! I so understand.. hmm, curiosity is a killer :D We shall see what happens.. I hope something soon. It is agonizing to wait, isn't it?
I can't wait either.. we'll see if the pendulum knows, if they don't make a move, haha ;)
I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s - what a tease! I love a secret and love this side of your writing. Ok so when is the next part already!!!! Thumbs up as always;)
Hey Shari,
Moi, a tease? ;p I was having a cheeky moment. ha. Now, I believe I've opened a can of worms.
Shhh.. It's a secret about when the next is due.. LOL
Great to see you as always :)
Wonderfully written, I love how you describe their connection,
Ive posted a few poems up here and although it is a completely different style from yours I would love to hear your perspective on them. Thanks
Thank you, Se7enth Poet! Much appreciated.:) Okay..thanks for the invite.
where are you i am a couple of steps behind....
I'm right behind you...Boo! :D
what's the story.... lets write something....
Write something where?
.............................and what story? :D
What's your story.. how are things?
i am fine,,,, i am with my son and family, feeling like writing something but don't know what.....
things are good, peace perfect peace..........
what about in forums?
good.. happy to hear.
I've been bouncin around the net ALL day. between writing and other sites.. *getting my fix* LOL
peace :)
wow so you are all fixed up,,,,,,,, what other sites, writing sites?
sorry a cat just ran away with my tongue! LOL :)
you know research and stuff ;)
ha ha ..... see you around.....
Are you gone? :D haha
I missed your addition regarding the forums..
no i have not gone, lets wind someone up.... who? not me....
who? I feel like everything is new.. just had a peak in the forums and either it's the old fixtures.. or non heard of's.. :)
where is that Earnest Hub or Mark, different time zone i think pity,,,,,, ah well this is boring isn't it.... maybe i will ask a question and you put a silly answer, are you game, we will argue,,,,
Okay.. ;) let's have a fight LOL
yep.... i will get really stroppy...posted comment...you had better delete
stroppy?
I replied already :)
do you not know what stroppy means, earnest hub on there now,
No, I don't.. care to obligue?
Oh, I just don't do the forums well. I don't like arguing.. and haven't seen anything interesting there..
maybe we are no good at arguing.... nothing interesting, we will just have to make our own entertainment, coffee for me.
speak soon
ciao
This is so original. Thank you so much.
we all have our own little secrets... the image's so appropriate. thanks for using it for this hub :D
Aaaahhhh, That mystical connection of a man and woman in love on that level. There is nothing like! This is great hub and I love Barbara's timeless piece of "The Way We Were! :)
~ prasetio ~ Thanks very much.. Love hearing it is original! :) you know with all the romance novels and love stories and such.. Thanks for coming by
~ Cris ~ we do all have little secrets, don't we? But, wouldn't it be a shame if we allow them to encroach upon such beautiful possibilities in life..? I hope these two sort it out! time will tell...
I am so happy you see the image fitting.. and am very appreciative that your images never cease to inspire my imagination.. So, thank you, as always! :D
btw ~ Where is your new hub??? Hmmm. :)
~ Money Glitch ~ Ahh, I so agree.. connections like this are rare to find, I think... ;) So happy you enjoyed it.. yeah, "The way we were" is a great classic..BUT...it doesn't fit this saga...
This is " The way he makes me feel"..which is suiting.. :D
Thank you.. great to see you again.
ps. Does it take me to write one with a Cris image to see you?? haha If so, maybe we need need a new batch!! Ahem..
I know the feeling well...The tantalizing touching, the mutual glances, and the underlying sexual tension...all the sweetly anticipated advances that become more intense each day...building to an orgasmic relief when you finally knock on that door, and she opens it with a knowing smile...I walked in that door 42 years ago and haven't looked back since...Thank you for this lovely prose which reminded me of that early passion, a passion we continue to ignite in so many ways...Carpe Diem, Larry
Ahh, Mavern... you actually brought tears to me reading your comment! I am elated for what you have shared.. means so much to me :D Thank you for sharing such a loveliness..
Yes.... Carpe Diem! :)
the sweetness of anticipation ooozes from this hub. definitely a good share.
Thank you, loveofnight! Lovely to hear :)
Nice one, i enjoyed reading.
Thank you, Cryep! :)
Ow those what if..love 'em! :) Definitely will turn into saga ;)
Oh yes, the what if's.. :) hmmm... really? How do u know? Do you have a pendulum? ;p
this very good stuff it was breath taking reading this keep up the good work. check out some of my work and let me know what you think thanks
Wow, so beautiful and sensual! I'm eagerly awaiting the continuation...
I love Barbra! Just the perfect touch for this hub. Perfect image from Cris too!
~ Eman ~ Thanks very much.. Happy you like it. Sure, I'll come by, thank you. :)
~ Jill ~ Thank you so much. Ooo, the sequel.. hmmm.. Should be interesting. I have not ever written anything like this before.. so we shall see if I can pull it off to meet the expectations... At least it is trying something new, eh? :D
Too bad I dont have a pendulum ;p I dunno how I knew LOL But I'm more excited about this than Eclipse.. :)
Hey blaise,
I believe, some things are known without asking the pendulum ;) This story excites me too. So much that choosing how to express it in a contiuation is tuff :) Hmm.. I'm not rushing on writing the next.. I've thought a lot about this piece and am so torn between just letting the readers ponder upon it or continuing..sometimes I think giving too much of a story away can take away from it's orgins. :) Thanks for coming by :)
ooohhhhh the tension is mounting will there be a follow up to the story, will there not...... i think the phantom, may be coming out of his box again......... missing something, what could it be....
Ahhhhhhhhhhhh, the tension... does it feel good? LOL we'll see if anything happens.. haha.
hmm. phantom?? where is he? :)
I thought you flew away for good.. LOL.. nice to see you!
Haha, btw.. poet, just noticed this is on the front page of poems..again..
Shall we say.."enquiring minds want to know??" :D
Yep, something told me..but wasn’t a pendulum ;) Ya, I know that feeling..it’s so tough how to continue..but this one is unforgettable and I know the rest will be too ;)
i saw this on the front too, please do not keep us waiting too long.
me........ i thought it was you that was missing. Flying off to work again now though, no rest for the wicked.
the phantom is in my mind just a present..... maybe get him on to the computer soon, we will see..... busy making cards, so many celebrations, all at once, i am getting orders once more, hooray. Kind of inteferes with my writing, as two obsessions at once is tricky
for some, coyish-ness is a virtue practiced in secret - an honest piece and wonderful to boot,write on!
~ blaise ~Hmm.. believe me, I know how you know ;) Thank you, for the lovely words of encouragement and understanding... Means a lot! ;)
~~ Hey Miss, hmmm. I'll try not to, yet we shall see. All in good time. :)
~ Poet ~ I guess, I have been away.. :) Great to hear you've been busy.. we shall catch up soon. :) Ohhh, I would not know anything about obsessions.. wrong person here! LOL (JK)
~ George ~ Thanks so much for the lovely comment! :)
This does happen and they can divulge into their fantasy, I did, strange that what you wrote reminded me of how I met my partner, so it can be true. But you hold the power. Really great, part two please...
Sweet, Zac! Thanks so much for sharing.. brings hope... beyond how! :) hope the power unleashes itself, ha. Ahhh, part two.. hmmm.. okay. :D
just been reading this, it seems like light years away, and it was only days, not unpacked yet, and repacking to go back to look after my dad while my sister goes home for a while..... speak soon
yeah, it seems far away from me too.. oh well, it was a nice fantacy. I wish your father well... and in light of what you have shared with me in the past, I think this opportunity is a blessing for both of you.. I had to make amends with some stuff from my early years with my dad too..be grateful for the opportunity..speak soon. btw, it is great to have friends like you that take the time to connect.. :)
Amazing, simply amazing! I read it with great interest...
Thanks, Moulik! I "thought" it was too. thanks :)
Very nice. I enjoyed this one. Beautiful visions that came to mind.....Best, GPAGE
Thank you, GPAGE! :) Visions can be pleasing...
yep, you still got it. xox CC
Ahhh, thank you, CC! :) I appreciate it so much. AND thanks for bringing me here :) a lovely dream!
if you don't finish this story in one week, I will drown a puppy.
It feels like reading a scene from a novel or something. With the genre that is not yet known. Brilliant hub.
Aww, Graham, that would be sad. Well, I did't realize you liked this story. I will see what I can do. Or rather what my imagination can do. Thanks for showing interest of a continuation. Very kind of you :)
Thanks a lot, Hugpageswriter! How lovely of you to say. Love is in the air. All of a sudden this piece is being viewed a lot again. Thanks for coming over for a read. Nice to see you. :)
the ball is in your court, the kid across the street just got a saint bernard, I would hate for him to have to learn about death like that.
why, why?, why would you do that, that poor kid and his puppy, that was not nice.
Thank you for your comments and interest in this story to continue. I'd love to continue it at some point, yet it needs to be when it comes. I am not one to push something that is not ready to be said. :)
Ps. I was rather excited to see that J.D. Salinger may have commented.. hehe :)
Excesior! I loved it, great stuff.
Wow, thanks Joshua! :) Ah, I so want to continue this story... yet, I typically only just capture moments, not a story. *sigh* =)
one fan of yours missed your writings... ;)
Oh, yeah?? hmm. who might that be? hehe
Thanks, blaise! =)
I dunno, just heard her saying... hehehe
Ahh, well that is sweet! I miss being around and connecting with you and some others. Things have been really busy lately. And either my muse is on holiday or I've been dumped ;)
that's a shame if you have been dumped i have been looking for some inspiration.
Yes, I'd agree with that! Ahh, to think that I've been mUsEd! hehe :D
Good luck with finding inspiration.... I feel a stirring within, yet robbed for words.. maybe I need to go to a different form of expression...maybe. :)
like painting a picture, of some such thing do you mean?
Yep, painting may be it :) tis the season to bring the painting gear to the beach.. ;) I have been doing so much formal writing, that it will take me to have "time" to center on writing something poetic, I think..
I like this Invictus. There is nothing like the energy between to people "before" they connect. You captured it in a most edible way. :)
ah no i can feel a poem brewing i really can, i think you will have to let one out soon. The formal writing is it all top secret..... writing when i had to would probably not suit me at all i feel....... a hobby is all i can muster. I am rubbish at painting..... wish i could paint, you never know maybe one day speak soon
~~Thanks, Randy! Wow, if it is edible to you, that tells I did good! :p It is quite a feeling, isn't it? And it lingers and hungers... on and on :) Thanks so much for coming by!
~~Joy, you read me well, there is a poem brewing.. maybe many... I just need some space to feel how to place it :)
Formal writing is different, especially for someone else. It is a challenge for me to remove my personal vibe when writing. But, it is a great lesson and I have an array of topics to shoose from. I am grateful for the exoerience.. Now, back to work for me :D
Check out some of the discount dollar stores. You can get canvas, brushes, and paints for cheap. And just explore... its aout fun.. and remember you can always paint over something once it is dry. :)
good advice, and yes we all need space lot's of it.......
Hey Joy, nice to see you've returned. I hope things are okay.. Sorry to hear about your dad. and the email should be out soon :)
What I meant about space, is that I need to have some time away from focusing on biz and formal writing..a little time to just focus on something poetic. I tend to be driven in either format. Bouncing back and forth does not seem to work well for me. I like to feel deeply intrenched in what I want to write poetically. :)
See you soon.
You've described that intense, crackling moment so well!
Thank you, SilverGenes..Ahh, happy you think so. It is rather intense, isn't it? :)
who would have guessed such wonderful things would come to and end one day...... I so miss Cris already.
I so miss Cris, too. I refrained from going further with this one... :) At least we can hopefully find comfort in the having often expressed to Cris how much we loved him...
If he did not know how much... well, than he was in 'denial!' LOlzzz :D
msorensson Level 3 Commenter 2 years ago
Beautiful, thank you. Yes, he should knock on her door [smiles]. Take a chance. Live the moment. We only have NOW.