Please forgive me.. - by Invictus
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Please forgive me..
For, sometimes words lack
Simple expressions
Crazy thoughts in my mind
To share my feelings in a succinct way
Caught in the loop
One might say
For how long
Maybe endless days
Or maybe I'm spinning away
It's alright, don't worry
It feels good
like a hot and spicy curry
I'm learning to live
In this majestic haze
Map-less wonders have their play
I find peace in traveling through time
Rereading all the ramblings written
Pages of attempts
To piece together a perfect display
Delicately woven
A clear path through my heart
As plain as day
A glimpse of the spark
But, today just maybe a song
Is best to describe
While I find words for another day.
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:D that's great to hear! Funny how feeling that words will be received in a mundane way, actually say more than we feel they will... sometimes. Thanks, blaise!!
oh, funny I watched the vid to the complete end after publishing and it is ironic the messege at the end, hehe. :)
It happens to the best of us...things are sometimes beyond our control. And yes, words are sometimes not enough, or worse, just get in the way :D
well, hello! yeah, I agree! haha :) Thanks, Cris!
oh dear what have you done?
what??? didn't do a thing..promise! LOL ~ my finger is pointing at someone else! :)
I loved it, I*. That music and voice, along with your poem and the picture, put across a certain mood. I really loved it. Thanks.
Another great one.
Paradise ~ Thanks so much! :) so funny, trying to write something and feeling silly to only express why I'm a bit hindered to share.. wow.. thanks!! :)
Putz ~ Thank you! I've been meaning to get over your way. Hopefully soon! :)
MM...Invictus...tasty cup of you. :)
Excellent poem !Cheers ! :)
Raven ~ really? That's nice to here. Thank you :)
tantrum ~ haha. Thanks so much! :)
my favorite time .. when I see a new one from you (though there are a few I havent read.. I save yours. . cant spoil myself reading too many at one time. . but today cause it is so cold and dreary here I may indulge myself and go for another one :)
could you tell I love your work ;)
well, I can't thank you enough, wavegirl! You shower me with lovely kindness..and make me super smiley. I very much appreciate how yoou love my work.. I guess, in a sense it tells me that I am speaking from my heart, which is where I hope to always speak from... I see you have indulged, too. I'm catching up! Thanks again. :)
i so l like the picture that accompanies your poem, my guess is someone will be borrowing that .......... lovely sentiment to this too
Thanks seasoning! anyone is more than welcome to the images/pictures... Glad you enjoyed! :)
This poem is really excellent. Thank you, Invictus
Thank you, Jess! much appreciated.
Very nice! I appreciate poems when I see them! :)
Thank you, AEvans. much appreciated! :)
Nice poem thanks for sharing
Nothing short of beautiful. Not that I've ever thought anything different. : ) Always love your work.
I ENJOYED THIS HUB & THE MUSIC WAS UNIQUE & DIFFERENT, ADDED THAT DELICATE TOUCH TO YOUR WORDS, WONDERFUL, THANK YOU...R.K./LP
I ENJOYED THIS HUB & THE MUSIC WAS UNIQUE & DIFFERENT, ADDED THAT DELICATE TOUCH TO YOUR WORDS, WONDERFUL, THANK YOU...R.K./LP
coolman ~ Thanks.. much appreciated. :)
Becca ~ Thanks so much... still feel the lightening in my veins... hahaha :D nice to see you.
Karen ~ This song actually spoke better than I could, so I am happy it had a touch...Thank you :)
psssssssssssssst can i have the heart out of your hand
hahaha...you take candy from strangers?? =)
i just wanna borrow the heart is all.
sure go for it!
i have already eaten it actually, that is why the wrapper is just left in your hand
hahahaha... love it! it was dark chocolate...my favourite! :)
have you another one for me please
I'm full of chocolate hearts... of course you may have one, too! :D
thankyou i forgot to say i like your poem about the snow, i am going to find it, as soon as i have eaten my chocolate
sweet, thank you! :)
Invictus are you apologizing for not being able to say what you so beautifully are saying. Aren't you clever.
You think? Thank you, Randy! That is so sweet of you! :)
Makes me want to read it over and over. Loved it and the picture, too!
Thank you, Forever! :) happy you loved it!
This is nice
Thank you! :)
Great hub! i really enjoyed it.
Thank you! :)
You have the most phenominal way with words I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s. Expressive tapestries woven with pure emotions. Every time you put pen to paper, your gift makes me feel as though I've received one!
Thank you, SEM Pro ~ feels good to here. btw... everytime I think of a pillowtop,I am reminded of you.. such a lovely way of describing an approach to poetry.
A Very Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours! :D
Thanks for the sentiments.
you're welcome! thanks for the ride by! :)
any chocolate hearts i am peckish, going to write more about Aunt Matilda now
but of course.. chocolate is soul food..and dark chololate has health benefits! ;) I'm off to write, too. look forward to more Aunt Matilda...
I remember a story about a witch named matilda from when I was a child..haha
well she is the witch and you are the wizard it is done now ha ha aha ha
me, wizard? hahaha~ read it and like the "Phantom of the opera" images.. :)
did you recognise him?
recognise who?
sincerity is all becuase words is not enough at times, wonderful Invictus, Happy New Year for you, more for you next year, Maita
Thank you for such sweet words, Maita! Happy New Year to you! :)
very powerful...! you words are polished to perfection! loved this...
Thanks! Nice to hear you liked it! :D
I am liking your work, were you forgiven then?
Thanks, Miss! Hmmm... not sure! (I think so, though ) :)
wrote a new hub, think you might like it.
I did enjoy it.. thanks for sharing! :)
It's amazing how sometimes words just fight to get out, when other times they pain us to even THINK up.
Yes, so very true, brandonfan! :) And also, those times that we have that burning inferno inside and the only we can share is through words, can be quite a challenge... if we would really like to show in other ways!! =) Thanks for popping by and sharing.
I adore poetry and I adored that piece. Thankyou.
Thank you, Isabelle. Super sweet of you. Welcome... see you round.
Short, but one could never call it simple as you have packed a lot in it! It's beautiful and you really have a way with words, Invictus. The analogies, the pace...I am not a poetry reader but I could get used to reading your style!
Thanks so much, Ann Nonymous! :D very appreciated.
just came back for anothere heart chocolate. I could not look at the song on the video at the time. I looked after a lovely boy, he had lost 5 friends in a car accident, he was the only survivor. This was his fave song. He was brain damaged from a failed suicide attempt, after the crash. He was also paralysed from waist down....... I used to write poems with him a lot, and i wonder how he is now...... I looked after him in a horrible nursing home, that he hated for about 18 months. I listened to the vid now, and maybe i will try to find out how he is.
Thanks for stopping back.. I did myself the other day.. :) What a heartfelt situation. Thank you for sharing. Ah, that poor boy what an experience he endured. I think it would be lovely if you found him and contacted. Thanks again for sharing.. :)
going to read a book now...... bye for now
g'night :)
speak soon......
okay..
soon that was a life time ago.... could eat a chocolate just now, snowed in, and missing work actually, how are you doing.
you're right... so long ago, yet feels like yesterday! :) I'm great. pretty flowers. hope you get some chocolates for v-day!
blaise25 Level 4 Commenter 2 years ago
I feel like spinning everytime I read your latest ones.. :p
how can someone not forgive you with that poem and song :)