h20 - By Invictus
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I came to the sea
Where you found me
Swallowed me whole
Ignited a blaze
Engulfed me with your flame
Water us down
Never to drown
We...drenched in a-bliss
With every passionate kiss
Never thought a love
Such as this
Could be felt , not a miss
Hot earthly fire, so divine
Coupling of our flesh
Cherry to vine
Encompass sweet surrender
Rise as us sun
Set in your throws
Take my hand
Let's roll in the sand
Of time that surrounds
To you I am bound
Swim in our ocean
Our own ecstasy
A shower of our love
Is high demand
Love so deep
Clenches like a clam
As diamonds shot through the night sky
Every-time I see your eyes.
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Nice one, I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s liked the poem and the illustration.
Thank you so much, SEMPro! Very grateful to see you again! :)
Gypsy, You are a star! I have been drown by romantics of late, for sure! :)
Invictus that was yum. I want me some of that :)
Nice rhythm. Reminds me of.... :)
really deep and colorful!
Thank you, tjmate13, it is pure red... true and through! ;) (If only I could sleep, now) lol
Thank you, Randy! :)
Thank you, Not Telling! :)
read this first thing this morning, and was dragged out to take my grand kids to see ice age 3 in 3D........ could not wait to get back to listen to song again.... give it to me
the image at the top is brilliant.....
give it to me...... see I am listening to it again now.... love it also.... been out all day hooray , better than 4 walls, lovely words as usual, and strung together really well, my pal..... xx
Thank you very much, Brenda! I greatly appreciate the lovely compliment! :) This is one of my favourite songs and I am so grateful to feel it! lol...xx
p.s. How was Ice age 3? Have not seen it yet! :)
Ice age 3 was ace....... even though the kids said I looked like a nutter with dark glasses on, the 3D was good and storyline cute.....
You are so funny, Brenda! Thanks for letting me about the film. 3D means We will have to see before DVD! lol :) - I typically wait.
You breathe poetry.. ;)
You are so sweet! ;) ~ I always enjoy your appreciation! I have regained some equilibrium and am feeling like writing something spicing, I hope! lol =)
take your time........ we will always be here waiting for you...... equilibrium
Awww, Brenda! You are super sweet! I have been enjoying life outdoors more and it is lovely. My way of fueling passionate fire! lol ~ Hope your move goes well. :)
Sugar and spice and everything nice.
Thanks DREAM ON! Oh, what a feeling, indeed! :)
this was 3 months ago can you believe it
I am going crazy..... great song as i have said before
Ahhh, I cannot believe this was 3 months ago...Gosh how time flies...Oh, what a feeling I was vibrating at this time. *sigh* :D
vibrating??????
ha ha.. guess, that could be thrown in perplexing ways... =0)
i need oxygen
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.... :)
Breathe!
this is quite a nice little ditty, i am looking for someone to teach poetry to me..... maybe i could get a few lessons from you
Thanks, Miss Take! hmmm...your work seems quite fine to me! :)
I had to reread it again.A shower of our love.I love those words they captivate my body and senses.Hope all is well and you had a wonderful and relaxing Thanksgiving.
Hi Dream On, thank you for coming back! :D I am really happy you enjoy this one and it is lovely to come back to. Things are going, going, going, here..haha...Decorated for Christmas this past weekend and it is lovely the nostolgia that comes with all the ornaments and decorations.. Ahhh... This was the first time I did not celebrate Thanksgiving.. Living in the UK now. Though it was a lovely day! Hope all is well with you and that you had a lovely Thanksgiving in the beautiful east.. Thanks for stopping! :)
lovely song and hub, i am swimming now after that oops video has been removed that is not fair
Nice.....................................................................................................................................hahaha Thanks for the visit, enjoy the swim.. btw is it deep and blue!?
yeah lets go there
oops .. on my way
you capture all of the elements of bliss, the salty spray, the ocean of motion, the warnth of drowning in the beams of lover's eyes, the fire that smoulders deep inside, starry eyed thoughts, beach side strolls, sandy rolls into the cleansing surf.....lovely picture to visualize here~~~~~~MFB III
Thanks, MFBIII! What a kind thing to say.. :)
SEM Pro Level 2 Commenter 2 years ago
Beautifully done I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s! Does the "whatever" mean it sounds more like lust? :) Have to admit, haven't often thought of getting into a state of speechlessness over a guy - but it's a wonderful concept. I prefer the tender words you found...