i am you are - by Invictus
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i am you are
I am such as a feather, tickling with delight
A lost song in your heart with so much might
A word of significance should you not fright
Love extravagant without a fight
A knowing in you we are so true
Yet disagreements are Healthy for two
For when one sees only I such care
A lie and death love doth come
Wicked spell labyrinth home
Though if you wish a love so true
Take my eyes so to see you
Talk and share the dreams astound
I have many to share the same around
My life of growing has much the same
We all have love the sky sheds true
Yet where the one to spill within two
My mind has traveled lovely ancient sound
Love a beach a comforted ground
I see and feel a clapsing cheek
Liven thy love which feels so meek
Whether we merge, complete the feat
Cherry to vine. love so complete
Intoxicated pleasure without rewind
Grater measures sure to blind
Ever lacking spirit to test
Buxom love, slow digest
Though intricate pleasure fills our brain
Our meeting alters altered plain...
So known so great it said not sow
The lyrics of love in set removes pain to test
From the humble song you see below such higher
Vibrant heart through thy love, above we glow
A puddle above ...
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Paradise7~ Thank you for seeing the depth...I have edited ..was a sloppy publish :) So thanks for seeing through.... Every angle of love is so beautiful to me..in writing..maybe I am the haunting note in a face to face.
All I can say is I love me, life, and this brill season of Autumn is my home..many inspirations to credit here...too many to say..
Grateful to gras words that are of unconditional love... :)
I agree another great poem. This was amazing I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s! I love your poetry. the way you place words together paints a beautiful picture. I hope you decide to publish these all in a book! i would buy it!
I am pushing sixty. That is enough exercise for me. Few things are harder to put up with than the annoyance of a good example. You have really annoyed me with this wonderful example of love. I want to take your eyes, but I would rather...well, we won't travel there. Very nice and it moved me like no other.
This is just beautifull. Thank you. I love poeme.
ralwus ~ :) Thank you very much for the feedback...greatly appreciated!! Cheeky one! :D
Another Brilliant read! Yes, the season is blessed with beautiful words. Well done!
AIDY ~ Thanks so much!! :) I feel as though I am delving deeper within myself (trying to) to aquire more depth in my writing... :)
So lovely poem and that movie is one of my favorites :)
I like what you're doing with the words, and I enjoyed this poem very much, Invictus!
shamel ~ Thank you very much...it's one of my favorites, too! :)
I so appreciate your insight, Jess Killmenow!! :)
Astoundingly breath-taking :) You inspire me invitus!
I like this one, it feels or seems like two poems coming
together into one. It is cool.
i always enjoy my stay when i visit
There are reasons too many to say as to why I now like poetry. Your poem above speaks of a depth of love many never come to learn, I think anyway. The simple beauty of a new found love is one that speaks loudly. Anyway, you are one of my favorites here, although I have only read a couple of the poets on hubpages. Again this poem was very nice.
keira7 ~ Thank you for reading! Much appreciated! :)
fianassaim ~ wow, thank you!! :) You have brought me much gratitude for digging within! :d
cindyleedavis ~ Thanks... I here you, when I read it is hear two voices in it merging! :)
wesleycox ~ Thanks so much. Your words mean a great deal, greatly appreciated... :)
love it !!!! ur so gooood!!! :)))))
Soft, deep, ancient, now - so many shades and rhythms of love in a poem! Thanks for sharing this!
Everything you write reminds me of this one spoiled little girl, but I like it, because I love remembering that I will see her again, but she won't remember me. then I will have my revenge ;)
Leptirela ~ Such a nice suprise to see you again!! Thank you! :)
Shalini ~ Thanks so much for reding me... I greatly appreciate it! :)
Howard ~ Hey, long time no SEE! :) I am happy you came out to comment..Jeez, I can only hope your definition of revenge is to love her right!! ;) Otherwise that sounds a bit creepy...
oooo my i love it! cherry to vine, love so complete.. uhhh my favorite.. of course i am a hopeless romantic so .. i loved it and u are ever so talented.:)
Hi Jade, Thank you for such a gracious compliment! :)
well, I liked this. That is an uderstatement for sure, but..."our meeting alters altered pain"...I really like that. Dont know how to say it better.
rednckwmn ~ Thank you very much...I hear you and so appreciate you sharing your insight,,so much! :)
Beautiful poem. Going to read more of your writings!
Hi Jane@CM ~ Thank you for the lovely comment! :)
i'd watch that Jane if i was you... only joking of course, nice poem,
My, my...Miss Take... I am so blessed today! :) So happy you like it!
Sex and violence, huh?
Hi Howard...I apologize, yet I do not understand your comment! Have a great day! :)
beautiful
chrissie123 ~ Thank you, thanks for stoppping by! :)
by vengeance I mean too taste blood, and by that I mean dirty things, that would make her blush to tell her friends ;)
Ohhhh, naughty things, eh? ha ha ~ sounds spicy.. ;)
read and listened to this and loved it.... just don't know why you are not finding us more vids to watch...
Why, thank you, Poet! :) More vids, eh? ha ha
I've been techy training so it has kinda taken me from poetry and music a bit!
how did it go...... is it the one they are talking about on here, think i in advertantly signed up for it, when watching the vid, of a man with glasses talking in a mall. Is it good will i be able to do it,is it too hard for me........... will it make you rich hello by the way been writing hubs again, can u believe it./...
Yeah, it is the one they are talking about on the forums... I am sure you can do it and it teaches skills and how to use software to research topics, and such to create target niche's to generate miney!! Give it a shoot! :)
I am good. Ohh, I have to catch up on your hubs!! See ya!
maybe i will try it, maybe i will be missing for ages then, if i am see you when i get back, maybe in 30 days ....... it will be like giving a monkey a gun,teaching tech stuff ha ha
Ha ha ~ That is too funny! Believe me, I am the same way, yet I have even seen with myself thatthe more I am online working with this beast, the more i learn...The great thing is that you can watch the vids over and over if you are having difficulty! :)
well hope my back stays bad so i don't have to go to back to work, it will be difficult to do when i go back, it is good it being free though especially if you do actually learn a lot.....
I is great and free! the first couple of days setting up the "Pre-season" stuff took the most time for me with shifting to firefox and the add-ons... yet it is a key to success for info! :)
firefox is already on this new computer, i have
Well go to the thirthydaychallenge 'pre'season setup and ass the recommended plugins so you can backlink easier and get SEO ranking's which will help to be more sucessful at learning how to rank higher and to check to see if your work is being pirated easier!! :D
If you are interested...
o.k. thanks, my daughter has found my hubs, she is so funny you can read her messages on there........ she is wonderwoman..... thinks she is anyway.....................
cool! Oh, how funny with your daughter..I'll have a peak! :)
she is one assertive creature, beware......
Wonderful love poem, I really enjoyed it.
Dynamite :)
MUSIQUE ~ Thank yous so much!! Great to see you about! :)
ek ellis ~ *Big smiles* Thank you :)
Done extremely well...Lovin' this one...with the great title, too: "I Am...You Are". Going to read this again...after commenting. Good one, I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s!
Hey, manly! So great to see you and thank you for the great comment! :)
Great job!
tjmatel3 ~ Thanks so much! :)
G'day Invictus, this is a beautiful poem, I've saved it as a favourite! Best wishes.
Hi, stricktlydating! Thank you so much! :) Ciao
Paradise7 Level 7 Commenter 2 years ago
Another great poem. How do you do it? How do you find the right, haunting, luscious words?