Deep & Blue - by Invictus
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Come swim
In my deep blue sea
As my rapture envelops
Covers thee
A warm emulsion
Of delight
Trembling waters
Cascade vibrant life
Lave in me
Under the sky
As you dwell
Sense you swell
Rolling waves of flux
Caress your essence whole
Drenched in maddness
Til' you feel me roll
Under
Potbellied fish
Immersed within
Cupped in suction
Extreme in function
Restless desire
Mouthless drool
Tantilizing abyss
Forward motion
Apex elavation
Fluid notion
High tide throbbing
Hurricane in my sea
Full moon eyes
Blood of earthly rise
Hydronated guise
Expended Breathe
Saturated within me.
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Care for a swim, Not Telling? lol :)
Well there is a balcony and the door is open, it is a hot day and my hair is soaking ......... not funny ha ha stop it now
I did not realize that Ireland got hot! LOL :)
P.s. Must be global warming! lol :)
No comment!
Thank you, Brenda!
Gypsy, it was all Brenda's fault, thank you! lol :)
Hmm...oh oh ... I feel like I'm eavesdropping on some private conversation.
Anyway, I like the poem. And the pictures too!
Jill, thanks you! I am glad you like it! It appears the poem created a tsunami in a friend when it was posted. All conversations are public domain here! xD
Please feel welcome! :)
The conversation seems to be a natural extension of the poem (which is really good).
oh dear forgot everyone is tuned in..... and it is so unlike me to reveal my true feeling.... what have you done to me!!!!!!!!
After reading this great hub, and the...ensuing conversation, I am off to bed!
Thanks, Russ! It is great that the life grew! :)
Brenda, you never cease to entertain me! :)
Have a great time. Paper Moon! I believe Sunday's exist to stay in bed all day, if so desired! :)
Damn girl!
I love to swim, Randy! And the tide is, high! lol :)
'saturate within me' I liked this very much.
Wow! Am I dead yet, I am very happy you liked it! :)
SI showed my mum your poem ..... she says she would like to go out on a date with you..... my mum is hot man......
Ha Ha. Thank you for the lovely compliment! I am humbled, yet shy that I may not satisfy you mum properly! :)
OH MY...:O) Hugs
G-ma... I call it ecstasy!! LOL ~ =)
yesss...:O)
You know it, G-MA! lol ~ unfortunately a vibrating shower does not satisfy as the real deal! I want to swim deep! woes me! ;)
P.s. I have been reading your love tale.. It is amazing... I will comment later when I cool off ! lol
Quite a sensual escapade... Well done...
Ioua~ Thanks. Great to here. Much appreciated1
I love swimmin' with bowlegged women...This sure woke me up from a Sunday morning fog....Larry
ha ha...well if you love swimmin that much, they would be bowlegged...glad to help with that fog. I greatly appreciate your comment! :)
So, .....Kudos. Canvas painted w/ words..I like it.
Michael ~ Thank you very much! :) ~ I apologize for taking over your sensual poem page, did not intend to be rude. Some of us are just trying to recapture some magic that we felt here at the time this poem was written... to inspire more hot pieces. that is the magical effects of amazing people on hubs. (:
tell me about it... but it is all about timing.....timing ....timing...... help
Well, I have no words!! Ok, well one, NICE!!
Candie ~ Thank you so much for the lovely comment and for reading! ;)
Awesome poem, I really enjoyed it.
Thanks Musique! I appreciate it and great to see you! :)
That was smokkkkkkkkkkkkinggggggggggggg/ :)
OMG....wooohooo!!! I am soooo honoured that THE poet likes it!! :))))
I am going swiming! What a lovely poem. thanks for this
starcatchinfo ~ :) Thank you..enjoy.
powerful and there is nothing like going for a swim.
DREAM ON~ Thanks, very much appreciated! :)
i have just been swimming, what a coincidence then read this
Well, I think was a good idea to swim prior to reading, eh? :)
R.U.O.K.
*sign*, yes...thank you for your concern. I guess sometimes the nights get a bit nippy. I would love to take a dive into this ocean.. :)
go on them swim for it
Thanks, I'd love to, yet I think there needs to be an available recipricant, eh? :)
you will find one...... can't believe you have not.....
Thank you, Poet! I have faith that I will! :)
she will not like it when you do ha ha aha
hahahahahahahaha.............................................................ya know some life left this poem with some old comments.... just not the same ;)
i know
hahaha... but of course... luckily, I can still read them lol
and i suppose i could still write them too
haha
Could you please tell me what happened to poetlorraine???Where did she go?Is she o.k?Tell her I send my prayers and best wishes.Thanks again for all your help.
a lovely walk down memory lane with lots of friends.... ah the joys...
You are full of more surprises than all the presents at Christmas.
Ahh, the memories. Sorry, DreamOn, Poet did not leave a forwarding address ;)
I'm going for a swim.....
you are so not funny
Not Telling 2 years ago
Very steamy, Invictus! Nice.