Breathe Easy
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Mad Violet
Gliding in the wind
Sojourning through time
Day
Night
Spirit of kind
Silent dance
Hearts unwind
Fire to ice
Wine to vine
Frozen waters
Breathing warmth
Dancing nymphs
Flesh of petals
Soft
Supple trance in rift
Moist
Jelly in rain
Soothing mystics of yearning
Eclipsing through life's journey
Drops of time
Goblets of wine
Moisture descends
Petal to vine
Humm the song
Live the vine.
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Thank you, Gypsy! It's been a beautiful peacful day.
another beautiful poem.
you are quite the poet my man, I really liked that one, well done
p.s.what is jelly?????
Well, thank you for your high praise of my manly appetite! lol ;)
p.s. Jelly is anything you want it to be! ;)
So, so many beautiful lines!
Iounn- Thank you for the lovely comment! Sorry I missed you, when Brenda walks into a room I am completely distacted! lol ; )
Randy- Thank you so very much! :)
aw you are so kind, poor lounn...... but I see no one else when you are around, so I understand the feeling...
;)
"Flesh of petals
Soft
Supple trance in rift"
I'll be humming all day, now. :)
you are a good writer, and I like your poems
Humm..... forever, Not Telling! lol :) Thank you!
Miss Take- Thank you so very much !!
Well, thank you, Thugluv! I'll come round to check you out as well! ;)
Hummm what do I see here? Or sense here? or feel here? Love is in the air???Nicely done my dear...:O) Hugs G-Ma
G-ma, I am sooo blushing right now! xD ~Thank you!
Very lovely and beautiful poem.. you've certainly got it going here.. :)
hubPW ~ Thanks for the lovely words... :)
What a great song to put with your poem
DREAM ON ~ Thanks, happy you liked it! I love this song... :)
Love this, it makes my mind go in many directions. I love a poem that makes me think! Great job!
Gypsy Willow Level 5 Commenter 2 years ago
Beautiful poem and illustrations