Blazing Light
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i am you are
To touch me, is to feel you
Light radiates and reflects the two
Waves penetrate the ethereal loop
Stars explode in intrepid mood
Silence non-existent
In electric groove
Hot embers not able to cool
Time births fundamental muse
Springs love where it sighs
Feeling replaces breathe
Taste of berries through the pangs
Riveting petals, dancer shimmers
Sound of rain, love bleeds
Deepen furrows for insane
Flow remains
Timeless whisper
Eternal red flame lives
Two within one.
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k@ri, your comment is greatly appreciated. I hope you did not get burned. : )
each line transcended into an ecstasy of heat and passion. I can say that each line represented a fury of desire. nice work. I was reading about how you chose your name and avatar...sweet.
Very.....electrical!
The heat is evident. The first line my favorite: To touch me, is to feel you.
Nice :)
Beautiful, I*n*v*i*c*t*u*s - I really enjoyed that journey :)
Am I dead, yet?- thank you...I am completely humbled and grateful for your your response. You are a poet whom which I have a great admiration. :D
Laughing Mom- thank you, too. Happy my feeling registered! : )
Randy Behavior- That is my favourite line too! :D I am humbled with your presence as well. I have read your luscious poems and can so relate, just don't know how to respond sometimes! You are another poet of which I aspire! Thank you!
Sufi- Nice to see you again, it's been awhile! :D I am glad you enjoyed the journey!
Ooo, I like this too. And with Randy I too like that first line. Nice
Omg, the thought of the first line is incinerating to me. ( : thank you!
Incinerating. I suppose it is. youare most welcome yer hotness.
Nice to see you, too - I like to stop by and read your beautiful words. Your imagination stirs the soul :)
Oh my... love the heat that follows, Randy Behavior! lol ;)
Thank you, ralwus!
Badco- Thank you, glad you love it! It is hot, be careful!
Sufi- Thank you. Always good to see you! Thanks for the lovely words.
This is beautiful Invictus. Pure passion and fire. You are wonderful!
Thank you, Disturbia, for the wonderful compliment! Very grateful. :D
poetry poetry poetry so much of it when you know where to look
Brenda, I know where your mind is! :D You blew up the hub screen yesterday!! lol Isn't it the explosion of the imagination that drives the mind to creation! Enjoy the ride! ; )
P.S. I am happy you foud my hub!
You have a nice way of making these words do what you wish. The images and rhythm make a steamy combination.
I am so upset because Blonde Poet and Trooper whatever his name is, have ruined the poem that Chris A and I and Na. kept going have you seen what they have done to it ,,,,,,, it is beyond recognition now, and there is beauty lost somewhere in that poem
Brenda, I am confused as to what you are saying? Are you talking to me?
I am talking to anyone who will listen, did you see my poems in the forum, only a poet could understand they have broken the rules of the poem that has gone on and on, ah well I suppose it does not matter, but a poet i just presumed you would have followed it's life on here, but maybe not sorry for taking up your time.... I just thought it would not end
But all beautiful things must come to an end - it is only when they are gone that you realise how beautiful they were.
I did not know of a poem in the forums. I am not familiar with the forums, yet I will try to find it. It sounds as though you are sad. :(
yes maybe I need to lay it to rest, as Sufi says, I am so sorry for troubling with you this minor problem, I will get over it..... x
I see you have found the forums then..... welcome my friend x
Wow, that's some amazing passion. I like the fact that it's both near and far -- being right there with the two and also being far away in the universe with distant stars exploding. Nicely composed!
Not Telling- I greatly appreciate your reflections. Your profound ability to stir passion, love and inspiration to all that read your gift of imagery and vision. I think it fair to say that one should take care in the amount of your creations read in one sitting :D
Sufi- My for not being a poet that quite poetic! :)
Brenda- yes, I did find the poem. Wow, quite a beautiful piece and on going. I understand there were "rules" set, yet I feel the best forms of art and beauty are formed outside boundaries of rules. It is apparent that the poets you referenced were in a passionate in the creation and it seams to have resolved itself. Thank you for guiding me to it!
Benjimester- Thank you very much for your lovely comment! Your description is beautiful. Very appreciative to have great poets like yourself enjoy it. :)
I confess I was drawn to read this poem by the beautiful image and on reading the poem I found it even more enchanting than the image. Nice work.
It made me think....birth of love...thanks...this is great! :)
Moyra- Thank you for such a lovely compliment! Greatly appreciated.
Tom- Oh my, what a beautiful way of seeing it. I can see that, too. Thank you very much. :)
I really like this!
Thank you, Drew!
Red hot poem. Very nice! I like the first sentence
freelanceauthor- Thank you very much. This poem definitely stirred me silly! ; )
your words can definitely paint good images. well done. =)
Touche, Thugluv! lol - Thank you for the lovely compliment! Your writing is amazing ! :)
nice image
Thanks, kasanova! Love your name! :)
Explosive!
Thanx, 4ever Mo! :)
i loveyour last line the best one within two.you really are great at expressing the deepest thoughts
Thanks for such a lovely compliment, Dream on! :)
invictus...Interesting juxtaposition in your last line " one within two "...the cliched line would be " two within one "...nice use of heated adjectives...Was like getting on an escalator; once on, you are in for the whole ride...Thanks, Larry
Thanks for well thought comment, Larry! I see your point with the last line, yet I guess I saw and felt an eternal flame could be shared by two. Don't know if it makes sense. And wow thanks for also bringing me back here to this poem.
I'd like to write more like this one! This was the most viewed to date as well. Ahhh, to flow like this consistently is a lovely thought! :)
Thank you, Larry! I have edited, for I now see your point! :)
how can we be back here today of all days and what a total nurd i was........ mentally ill i think
change the title of this too play around with them all why don't you
Well, alright then! :D nice to see you!
Best of luck with sorting it all out! :D I am sure you will do what is best.
hi just came back here to read........
oh, this is such a distant memory... :)
i remember this as if it was yesterday
That is because it is when you blew up the hub screen!!! So, yeah, I remember it too... It was what it was.. a great time in the past.... I am grateful for thenand more so for today! :)
you are a great writer. First time i read this, i will be back for more
thanks, seasoning... you were yet, not even a thought, of a glimmer, of a spawn, at this time!! LOL :D
You have such imagination
and so many colours in your words
vote up
:)
k@ri 2 years ago
Whew, red hot, and great picture to accompany it!